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Wet Tale
by Lisa Skye

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Comment by Pink Satin Slip on 09/18/17
As Miss Wilson commented 10 years ago your lovely story struck a deep cord inside of me too. I hope you can ease my BP by maybe having a sister and brother romance and later having Mom join in  before sis heads off to college  But Oh she comes home SOOO often as she has her roommate visit and she adds so many great ideas to the fun then later to the love.  PLEASE KEEP WRITING , Miss SKYE I REALLY LOVE your style i'ts so refreshing and not put on like even some of the nose in the air comments I'm sad to see on this page.
Comment by Briar on 10/29/08
This is a fairly popular plot, boy gets wet and only girl clothes are available so ...  However, I don't think I have ever seen it developed quite as well as in this.   You have created a plausible sounding vignette here.  Thank you for sharing it with us.

Briar

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 01/02/07
Lisa is just incomparable at producing stories in this very special style.  Her characters care so much for each other and the boy's first dresing experinece becomes one of love and respect.
Lisa, DO keep writing.
Comment by Elaine Wilson on 01/01/07
Please continue with this.  It was lovely, it just struck that chord deep inside me.  

Your dialogue seems so realistic.  This really makes these stories ring true.  Please do consider expanding on the original scene and examine the feelings as femininity is embraced.

Comment by juliej on 09/12/06
a very sweet storry with a lot of scope for a lot more to be added it seems so up inthe air at this time more please do not leave us hanging about please
Comment by traceymac on 08/17/06
love your stories keep up the good work
Comment by (AJ) Eric on 08/13/06
Another nice one.  Thanks for posting.
Comment by Rose on 08/12/06
Hi Lisa,
       What a great story with lots of scope to add more parts, if you are going to. Keep up the good writing.

Luv  Rose.



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