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What a Clever Girl
by Eliza Claire

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Comment by donna on 12/30/03
Great story.  Lets see now, all are lezzie's and all are pregnant by each other(?).  This story deserves another chapter, that is, what color are the babies going to be???

Comment by Paula on 05/04/03
Saw the ending coming but a well done story that I was glad to read.

Comment by kimmie on 05/04/03
 A very creative story that is well written with a somewhat complex plot.I did enjoy seeing a new implement idea for the transformation and the overall creativity of your work.I do feel that the golf scene at the beginning although very well written did take away from the focus of the story and your sex scene was well written while not being extremely overly graphic was somewhat enjoyable but different than most work i've read here.However I do feel that if more emphasis were placed on the feelings of the individuals felt during the transformation with the writing style you possess the story would be greatly enhanced.



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