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What A Party Girl You Are, Dean
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by Tambrey on 12/13/11
One or two to rmeebmer, that is.

Comment by j on 06/20/05
intesting but needs more foilling out god story though

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/30/05
there is no hypnosis mentioned, so his going almost instantaneously from straight to happily gay wasn't really believable even with normal suspension of disbelief.  I guess I would have shot them all, especially dad and sis.

Comment by julie on 04/28/03
interesting but the pace was to fat to enjoy properly  a good set up with the sister and girlfriend a bit more work and some aguements would make this story go far

Comment by Nellie D on 10/22/01
I scanned a little but decided it wasn't worth reading.

Comment by T-54 on 10/22/01
 Very poor. I would've gone out and found a way to get even with those bastards. Especially the girlfriend, the madam, and even my sister. They would've had a new cunt.



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