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What Are the Odds
by Melody Sims

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Comment by juliej on 10/10/06
a good story the odd were very high 1 chance in a million welldone
Comment by bernadette on 03/07/06
melody dear

 i just love it when clerks know i"m shopping
fmr myself. if you become a steady shopper
they become adorably helpfull and love it
when you shop en femme.
Comment by Steve on 12/30/05
I love the style and the detail..Very powerfull suggestive imagery
Comment by Pat on 12/12/05
WOW Melody - what a fantastic short story... I found myself really imagining myself as the guy in the story and how cool it would be for a sales person like Karen to help me.  I can't even get my wife to help me pick out clothes.  Let me know when you write more.

Pat
Comment by Cathy on 12/09/05
Loved the story.

I agree with an earlier comment that it is complete as it is, but that said, I'll be looking for the next instalment, too.

I really enjoyed the writing style.

Thanks.
Comment by Pippa K. on 12/08/05
I was a bit skeptical of reading such a short vignette, and one labelled that it was just part 1 of a longer story.  Well, I needn't have been!

This is a very compact little gem.  Written with humor, drama, a bit of surprise and a hint of romance.  I think you did a marvelous job, and it could stand alone just the way it is.
Comment by Bobbie on 12/07/05
This story is starting off great and fortunately brings back some rather memorable memories.
Lets hope that the story continues in an equally positive manner.


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