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What Ever Became of the Sisterhood?
by Valentina Michelle Smith

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Comment by Sanwarmal on 01/08/13
Wow Claire, these are amay-zing! Im friends with Di and Vene and you have rlaley captured them in such a natural and beautiful way. I know that Di is over the moon about these   and with reason! Beautiful, artistic shots, cant wait to see the wedding photos!!!!

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 09/30/07
I HAVE ENJOYED THE "HUNTER" SAGA. HAVING MARGO MEET DIANA TO GET DIANA TO WORK WITH M.I.N.B.D.WAS WHAT MADE THIS STORY SO NEAT. NOT ONLY DOES THE AGENCY GET THE USE OF THE "ELLIS" PROCESS TO TRANSFORM AGENTS AND CLIENTS, DIANA MEETS AN OLD FRIEND IN MARGO. THE ABDUCTION OF DIANA FORCES HER TO STAY AS DIANA INSTEAD OF BECOMING "JOE" AGAIN. FOR ME, THE SWEET REUNION OF DIANA AND HER MOMMA TERESSA WAS THE CLINCHER. I KNOW THAT DIANA SHOWS UP IN THE ACADEMY SERIES, BUT THAT IS MAINLY HER DAUGHTERS STORY. THANK YOU TINA FOR A WONDERFUL LOOK AT A MARVELOUS CHARACTER.

Comment by julie j on 11/18/04
this has been a great story well written wonderfull i have found it a bit hard to follow burt managed and sorted things out into perspective well done

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 05/23/03
Bravo!  I really have enjoyed the "Best Served Cold" series, and I really like the way you have blended it with the "Men in Black Dresses" series.  At last men in dresses who are not stupid sissies submissive to every manipulative female!  I was surprised at the ending, though.  I thought Margo would not let Joe sacrifice himself by remaining herself.  I thought she would spray Diana, give her false Joe memories, change her back, and send Joe back to his mother.

Comment by Nellie D on 05/23/03
A well crafted story that concludes with a happy ending.



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