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What He Wants
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Barbara on 05/31/08
Fate! another of life's lessons.

Comment by juliej on 04/30/08
very good story fine contrast and unexpected results for him

Comment by Early June on 04/29/06
Another fine story !  This is another scary one, too.  When she asks him to "prove his love" by signing everything over to her, what is she giving him in return?  If she truly loved him, she would be trying to please him as much as he was trying to please her. I guess he is so in love, he can not tell the difference.  Thank you for posting this.  Now I have to find another of yours to read.

Comment by SassySue on 03/06/06
Another fine FemDom story from Jennifer White.  I especially liked that Alexa was given the final say in whether the change should continue.  One nit: why is dildo always spelled "dld" in Jennifer's stories?  Personally I would have like more details when Christine finally took Alexa with her strapon.  I also would have had Alexa gradually come to enjoy and even get off on that, but that's just my personal preference.

Thanks to Jennifer for writing and posting another great story!

SS



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