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I guess u have enough fans requestingfor the further stories.. I am one of them as the story is so sweet and I m totally hooked.. please write the next parts soon.

KZGKDX Thanks so much for the article post.Much thanks again. Much obliged.

i looked at that site TGSTORYTIME.COM but i could not find the story, have you uploaded it, or are you just not bothering with the story anymore.
That would be a shame but please reply thanks

Readers:  I have reposted this story on TGSTORYTIME.COM and have offered a challenge.   I am finally going to write "my" version of next next few chapters,  but I want to see want other people can put together too.   So go ahead... use this as a framework and write your versions of these stories.   Maybe we can incorporate them into an interactive you decide kind of story...

Thank you for all the compliments

Love ya Daisybelle

Terry's mother and Dr. Firm, should have being arrested and hanged for what they did with terry.  She's  not a mother, she is an executioner.
Disgusting.

What a beautiful story,I just love it when a mother helps her son become a beautiful girl

i like the plot it is good keep up the good work

Dear Daisy, How cute for a mother to want a daughter. Please cont. with grace and make him all gurly.

LOL Hana

plz continue you story it is really great and has a really nice plot i find it intriguing and gentle.

nice story,all this to get a car?wrong car to get for a girl with out a permement mechanic unless the girl likes to lay on the ground changing a fuel pump,changing points with long nails ugh not to many girls like grease with there pretty dresses. whats next?

Your story is lovely so far - just one question, when you wrote "coming soon", how soon is "soon"?  I mean, 6 years is a Loooong Time for me.

Briar

its a good story that needs to cointinue it shows how terri feels &understandsthis is to short to just stop like this please continue this

Daisy, please continue your story on Teri, I found it very enjoyable and fresh, especially due to the fact it doesn't have bondage or stuff like that in it. It is just a sweet, lovely story. Don't leave us all hanging out there waiting, we all want to see how Teri progresses and her relationship with Candy also.
Hugs to you, Janice

  Enough teasing get on with the rest of the story ...
your readers have waited for a long time for a finnish..

don,t let a talent go to waist ... you have the talent to do the story and to make a following with your work ...

thank you for your work so-far please continue .....again thank you
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Miss Belle It seems you got everyone wanting more and yet you ignore there wishes.  Many are willing to take it over if you don't want to continue.  Please make up your mind with what you want to do.  You have so many asking for closer to this story of ours.  Please consider what it is that you will be doing!

I just love this type of stoty line and cannot wait to read the rest D'oh where is the rest PLEASE , do come along and put all our minds at ease.I dont mind if some one read it some where else , I just wont to read what happens to Teri.

   Hugs  &  Kisses

      Kathryn.

Right, I just don't get it. Girls can look and dress as much like boys as they want, but boys can't look and dress like girls. Even though I believe there should be a firm physical difference between the two sexes.

a great begining to what seems to be a great story so far the other comments were interesting but i feel i must add my own which are this is a good story to start it seems to be that his mother wanted a girl and without his father around this bet is the best way to do it this is i feel an intersting point and i look forewards to the next part in due course thankyou

This is such a great story.  Please bring us Part 2 as soon as you can.  I just can't wait to read about Teri's date.  Will she wear her little black dress that she looks so hot in?  Please hurry!!

Wonderful story.. Just got really into it and then....Arghhh! No more story?   Please, please, PLEASE!!! ( I'm begg'n ya!) Some more huh! Huh?

Come on continue with the story its a great story and it needs to b finished

A great  story premise.  I'd like more of his feelings as he realizes how girlish he is becoming.  I'll look for the n ext chapter pf hiS saga.

So far I love it  ---  can't wait for the remainder

Well when is it to be finished? good story so far.

Its a good story his mother is very manipulitive the way she got him dressed as a girl with the car as bait it feels like she set him up and done it under a guise of getting to know his femmine side  the pills and tablets i reckon are hormones and at the end he is going to be a girl for the rest of his life look forword to the next part of this very good story

Dear Daisy, Given the 2001 date of the initial posting, It looks like you either can't or for some reasdon don't want to finish this excellent story.  If you like, I would be happy to write part 2 and onward; it would be fun.

i thought you story starts out nice the ideaof using a car as incentive was great.  i hope to see the next installment soon.


Julie LaRue

PS: if you do e-mail me be sure to use "sissy stories" in the title

Love your story, I hope you will be submitting the next part soon.I like long stories - I have a long attention span - but I don't like to be left hanging in the middle. Please finish the story.
Thank you, Toni

I hate to be the one that dosen't give you postive things the stroy is good but usually when you state others are soon to come two years do not equal soon!  I want this story to continue because I dislike reading something and never knowing how it ends!

Daisy, I know if I had that deal before I completed everything, I would have taken it. This a very good story, and I enjoyed reading it very much.

Barb

Love the story and eagerly await the second part.  It is interesting that Teri/Terry is discovering the agreement is becoming more complex each day, and is requiring more concessions than he/she ever imagined.  Although the story is not as smooth and might be desired, this is probably the result of the story being written in separate blocks, and  having the blocks submitted separately.

My only concern is Terry's apparent ignorance and indifference of the implication of shots and pills - isn't he the least bit curious about the "hormonal imbalance" that his treatment is correcting?  He doesn't like the shots, but tolerates them with an amazing amount of indifference and lack of reaction.

I loved the story and can't wait for the second part.  I found myself completely drawn into Terri's character.  Wish that this could only happen to me!  You're writing is wonderful so please continue.  Hugs, Lori

Love your story... and the mom and Teri's relationship...but I hope Teri is only experimenting with bixsexuality and eventually finds a boyfriend.  I really enjoy the way you are taking your time with the transition and lookforward to next chapter
Tina

Looking forward to the continution of this story as you promised. I am also looking forward to your growth as a writer. You have great promise and good instincts. Make yourself Teri and Terry in your mind see what they see and feel what they feel. The descriptive and character parts will flow from there. Great effort! Thanks!

Not a bad little story.  One of the comments stated they thought the story sound familar to them.  It did to me at frist.  But then I noticed the story progressed along a different line.  Artists borrow from each other all the time, creative ideas flows into more creative ideas.  It is even true in the technological world as well.  Hope you can continue the story as I am looking forward to more.

Kimberly.

I love your story hun, I am Bisexual and believe your story is very believable and sexy. It would be nice to see a boy get turned into a lady. There are boys out there that need to experiance what it is like being a woman, then maybe they would treat us with respect. Smiling. I hope you add more to the story, It is really nice well thought out plot and looking forward to him admitting he likes being a woman better than being a man.  I love to see which way he goes when he gets his choice of becoming a man or a woman, and why, and gives his reasoning for staying with what he chooses.

Keep up the good work

Good effort - Terry seemed to be too willing forone who started so oposed to the deal.

Great Story!
Good transgendered stories turn me on, especially teen-age boys bieng convinced to transform themselves into pretty girls.  Adding the sexy bi-sexual girl-friend and a glued on gaff was targeted to own fetishes. The crowning touch was adding all the leotards, tights, etc.  As that is my primary perversion, I can only ask for more spandex.  
Thank you for your contribution to the genre.

I enjoyed your story.  I am looking forward to many more chapters

Wow, love the story and can't wait for more of the same.

Great Storyline!  I really enjoyed it.  Hurry up with more.

a good story with a familiar subject for me since at the super market I work in I happen to notice how boyish some of the female hair cuts have become.   Make me wish I was in the situation.

This is a good story I started reading it on Fictionmania. I do feel you need to get more of your feelings into your stars. I will look forward to learning more about you and the person you are from your future works. Sal.

Why does this story sound vaguely familiar?  I think you might have something to offer as a writer, but I would begin with developing an idea of your own!

The story was very nice. A little choppy at times. You may find it helpful to add more descriptive language and flesh out the characters more. When I write that is the same area I struggle in.

Have a great day.

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