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What I Did On Summer Vacation
by Karen-In-My-Dreams

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Comment by Mildred on 12/13/11
What liberating knlowdege. Give me liberty or give me death.
Comment by Molly on 07/23/08
Pippa K. writes:

>>Seems like you had a much better time on your summer vacations than I ever did on mine!  Please, share more of these stories!

A much better time than I ever had in any part of my life! Stories like this contrast excruciatingly against the emotional poverty I was raised in -- no one ever wanted to touch me in that way, or have much else to do with me, either. When I read a story like this, the empty spot in my soul really begins to suck...

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/11/08
I LIKED YOUR STORIES I DO HOPE YOU WRITE MORE, IS THIS ALL FICTION? KEEP WRITING I AM TRYING TO BE A WRITER BUT CANNOT GET PUBLISHED THE RIGHT WAY I GET PAID. I WISH YOU A LOT OF LUCK THE STORY IS NICE AND SENSITIVE AND THAT IS THE WAY THE SUBJECT SHOULD BE HANDLED.
Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/11/08
I LIKED YOUR STORIES I DO HOPE YOU WRITE MORE, IS THIS ALL FICTION? KEEP WRITING I AM TRYING TO BE A WRITER BU CANNOT GET PUBLISHED THE RIGHT WAY I GET PAID. I WISH YOU A LOT OF LUCK THE STORY IS NICE AND SENSITIVE AND THAT IS THE WAY THE SUBJECT SHOULD BE HANDLED.
Comment by Bob on 04/04/05
Great stuff. What every kid wished could have happened. I almost got to that the summer I visited cousins far away but it was not to be. What luck these four had.
More stories please!
Comment by Pippa K. on 09/13/04
Seems like you had a much better time on your summer vacations than I ever did on mine!  Please, share more of these stories!
Comment by Carolyn Renee on 09/13/04
Lovely start to Karen's adventures. Please continue with your story! Love & Kisses
Comment by Carolyn Renee on 09/13/04
Lovely start to Karen's adventures. Please contine with your story! Love & Kisses


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