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What Really Happened...
by Ami Lamida

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Comment by Joe on 09/19/16
At the end of the first chapter, you should have had the two girls walk up to Larry and see his . . . . sticky mess.  They could have mocked him, his sister pinching his shaft, squeezing his balls, trapped inside his pretty tights and leotard.  Larry would moan and try to squirm away, but his cruel sister would just pinch harder.  Larry would become helplessly erect, prompting ever harsher mocking from his sister and her friend.  All the while, the protagonist looks on, and finds himself aroused, seeing Larry fondled roughly and abused in his pretty pink tights . . . just a thought
Comment by Johnny on 03/22/16
I really liked your story!  It was written very well.
Comment by Silvia. on 06/22/10
Why You write something like this Ami?
Very bad story.
Silvia.
Comment by juliej on 01/03/09
interesting story part four please
Comment by Yvette on 09/07/08
If anyone can contact Ami Lamida PLEASE!! Let her know I'd love to read a part four on this where they become performing little sissy sluts to the neighborhood boys with Melissa's direction.  Contact me if you like: quorumvette@yahoo.com  
Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/18/08
I hope the sister and her friend get punished for what they do I got away to do it, if you want to hear my idea e-mail me, because turn about is fair play but in my version Melisa and Sandra really get it with Larry and Arnold looking on.
Comment by tanyalynn on 07/27/04
just discovered these stories- i loved them and hope you will continue them someday.
Comment by Ami Lamida on 05/28/03
Dear Readers,

Just wanted everyone to know that this series will be taking a vacation after chapter 3, but I will continue it when the inspiration hits.  Thank you for your patience.

-Ami
Comment by Anon on 05/27/03
Confirms what I always suspected, that women are the most sadistic of people!
  So, how many hours have those young boys been without food or drink?
Comment by Pervette on 05/23/03
I don't know the Ellis story (although I've just found it, so I
soon will), but your story is off to a great start! I can think of
all kinds of exciting complexities between the boys and the girls,
and I'm eager to see what you're going to do with them. Situation
not entirely plausible, but it's such a happy thought and so nicely
worked out so far that that's not really a problem. Eagerly looking
forward to next parts.
.
--Pervy
Comment by Penny on 05/23/03
Wow, great story!
I love the idea of being tied up and helpless in sexy girly tights and pretty dresses :-)

Please continue with the story,

Penny


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