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What's Wrong
by Recneps

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Comment by Silvia. on 09/19/11
Very bad!

Comment by Dianna on 08/14/08
this...is very amateurish sugar. I think you need to develope the story and characters more, as well as the science behind the transformations. There is suspend disbelief and then there is this. I'm sorry, but please re-work and re-write.

Comment by michelle danielle on 01/02/05
This was obviously written by an underage author. Either that or you suffer from arrested mental development. If its the latter, I wish you well. If its the former, STAY OFF THIS SITE!!

Comment by 11111111111 on 09/13/03
What's TG in this story?

Comment by Donna Dee on 08/04/03
 I dont think I have ever seen or tried to read a story that was as badly written as this.   These pages are for OVER EIGHTEENS not under EIGHTS.

Comment by By The Way on 06/12/03
This was unimaginably inadquate.  No plot. No characters. No point.

Comment by Terrance on 06/11/03
I'm sorry. I couldn't make any sense out of this. It seemed like a nice concept, but I wasn't able to follow it. Perhaps an editor could help you? Good luck.



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