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WHC - Gay Bashers
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by Early June on 05/14/04
Dear jennifer:  It has been a while since I have seen a WHC series tale. This series is one of my favorites.  I look forward to them and read them as soon as  possible.  The characters have stabilized and the techniquies have been set.  One of the things that make them so much fun is your incredible creativity in finding new ways to do the same thing.
 This story seemed, to me, a little weaker than the earlier stories.  You developed it well enough; but then glossed over the "treatment" and the after-effects to such an extent as to leave this reader disappointed. I was confused by whom Patty had brought with him.  And how they were trained.  And how they were "adjusted" to help keep the WHC's anonimity.  And, what of the after-after- effects?  Are the entire families of all involved ruined?  Are all of those involved eventually "righted" except for the two leaders? Thanks for the sharing with us, April












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