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When Dave Met Kate
by Dave

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Comment by robin on 01/27/10
Hi Dave

splendid stories - I agree that the patient and unhurried way Daves transformations unfold makes for a great set of stories, I look forward to anything new you write in the style of gradually being isolated from "normal society" enabling Dave to explore more and more permanent feminising piercing and tying options whcih close down his masculine options / Look forward to Dave goes to Thailand or Brazil..


Comment by Nikki on 11/17/08
Dave,
Great story. Like other commentators, I love the unhurried nature of the transformation and the use of makeup.
Very much looking forward to the next part(s).
Nikki

Comment by Tim on 11/10/08
Great Stories.  Thank you so much for posting and please add more.  I really like the make-up angle.

Comment by juliej on 10/30/08
a brilliant start to this story well done lookforewards to readin more in the next part

Comment by Rose on 10/17/08
Hi Dave,
    What a great first part and what a lucky person Dave is. I am so envious. Your handling of the gradual changes is very good and keeps the story flowing. Cannot wait for part 2 so please post it soon.

Rose.




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