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When Dave Met Sally
by Dave

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Comment by Andie on 05/15/20
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Comment by holly on 02/08/09
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Comment by RITA SPENCER on 10/19/08
Part 1 is a good story, you have stuffed up with 8&9, which are in part1? However 'm sure you can sort it out and give us a good ending maybe?
Keep up the good work!
LoL
Rita

Comment by George on 05/31/08
Great ideas for my business. Thanks for the story.

Comment by alley on 10/15/07
well i have read this story now twice and read ur other one and will rob read them again and again lol so plzzzzzz can u carry on where u left off on the other story and this even start a new one                    thanks

Comment by AV on 12/15/06
Part one on here is parts 1-7. I found them separate on another site.

What are the revisions posted the other day? Just grammar/crap, or change to the old parts of the story?


Comment by Inkman on 08/14/06
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Comment by AV on 07/25/05
Does anyone know somewhere where I can read parts 2-7? Only 1,8, and 9 are on this site.

Comment by Wanda on 08/18/03
I love this entire series!! The story builds nicely and the characters are quite believable. Also, I would love to have done to me what happened to Dave. :)

Comment by Dave on 05/09/03
Sally says that she is going to give me breasts,
what shall I do?

Comment by kvsvb on 04/09/03
I love this story; keep going ;I have reed part 1 and 8 but i can find the other parts ;When wil i see them or where can i find them      xxxx from Holland

Comment by bobbie.s on 03/07/03
Loved the story. IT's what i dreamed about for many years, I only wish it could happen to me. Can't wait for more.
                                     
                                    THANK YOU,
                                   BOBBIE.S

Comment by Jynjer Kynh on 03/07/03
Wow.

Good story. Told with a great style. Just when you have it figured, it surprises you again.

I've kept coming back in hopes the next part has arrived.

I like that you tell the story thru the action of the characters.

Spice and Dreams, Jynjer

Comment by Jodi on 03/02/03
An unusual story. Before I read this, I wouldn't have thought a story with the main themes of tattooing and piercing could be such a turnon- but this one was. Although it was a small part, I liked the use of the beauty spots, a rarity in story site, and welcome  to this reader. I have found that when I make up someone, a beauty spot is a very sexy finishing touch.

Comment by ÅVǏÐ ЯΈÄĎĘŔ™ on 03/02/03
OUTSTANDING! I never thought that tatooing and piercing could be such a turn on. Love to see more.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 03/02/03
I'd like to see implants and a lacey bra style halter top tattoed on Dave - also let him choose a femme name.  I don't usually like this type of story, but I did this one.  I think it was the detailed descriptions of the work, and the fact that what was done was consensual. great job!  personal preference, I would have made the gloves fingerless (so "she" could use diffrent polish colors) and lacey to sort of match the fishnet motif instaead of all black.

Comment by Ms Cat on 03/02/03
Wow! Excellent story ... while I loved how the delicious irreversibility and magnitude of what was being done slowly dawned on the protagonist, what I liked best was how the author managed to reclaim tatooing and piercing for the fetish community ... I mean, nowadays you can get tatooed and pierced at the mall, it's ubiquitous and mainstream ... what was once shocking has now become "ho hum" ... but not this story ... it's far from "ho hum" ... I encourage the author to explore further ... 3-1/2 of out 4 stars!



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