If the women objected to being stared at why dress like slut's? I wonder how they felt about being stared at after Daisy poured acid over their faces.

With all the possibilities to change his behavior you managed to make him suicidal.  The most likely response to their actions is his suicide and i for one could not blame for attempting suicide or worse homicide.  Its stories like this that make females subject to the worst treatment by males.  Problems are worked out not tortured out. But sincve thgis is a work of fiction I really cant blame you for your insensitivity. POWER corupts remember??

Well done! Mistress Peg, Mistress Ellen and the Ladies from the office, Suzy, Anne et al, most certainly treated sissy daisy exactly the way he/she deserves to be treated -- forced to wear very short skirts, very high heels with a shape Diana Dors would die for. Having sissy daisy scurry from the mall to car and back again with armloads of packages was a stoke of sheer genius. And Mistress Peg's decision that one year's servitude in skirts, dresses and heels, plus any extra time for more foolish staring should just about do the trick. And, of course, additional humiliations at the office is just a cherry and whipped cream on top of a perfectly prepared humble pie.

as per my previous comments

Even after several readings, the revenge is still fresh and delicious. True, Mistress Peg, Mistress Ellen and the rest of the ladies did show a certain mean streak. But frankly, sissy daisy was most deserving. I do wish you would continue this masrvelous piece of poetic justice.

great story so far more please

Nicely done; and oh, poor sissy Daisy. Well, the punishment fits the crime, as they say. And it fits perfectly.

this is a great start to what so far is a great story its intresting the punishment for the stares i wish his room had been changed to be more secure ie heavy lock on door barred window and more bongage

Power corrupts the purest one.
Dark evil is fought in light of the sun.
The venial females of small graces
Hide vast evil behind smilng faces
More evil will show before the story's done.

Go read of the strong female
Few are brighter than a male
Flesh is corruptable
Hatred is contemptable
And thereby hangs this tale.

   Your writing is clear.  You have a good idea for a plot.  You tell it in an interesting manner. Even your characters are interesting and full enough for the size of the tale.    But---    I am confused.  Why didn't he refuse at the first store?  He can see where this is obviously going.
   When Security arrives at the store, tell them he is being forced and wants to swear out warrants, kidnapping, assault, etc.  At the same time he needs a good divorce lawyer. It is obvious his spouse has no respect nor any consideration for her former mate.  They can never exist as a couple again.
   He already has lost his job.  He could never go back to supervising after such a treatment by the hands of his coworkers.   And as to his supervisor, depending on what country, or political subdivision, she might be able to document and effect a pay cut, but needs records and all sorts of justification before she could do that in even the smallest, privately owned operation.. She could never do that in a large corporation.  People are promoted based on skills or relations with people and technologies.  
   All of these women need to be rehabilitated.  Is there not a sane one in the bunch?
   I can't believe, any loving person would do that to their spouse.  See a Vickie Tern Story to make these acts seem more plausible.  

I agree with Jezz.  The idea of making him buy women's clothes and putting him to work in a feminine role at work is delectable, but the crueltyand the lack of desire to enlighten works against the premise. I'm hoping the next chapter comes off better than this one did.

After part 2
    The women are still bitches and sympathy still lies with the guy even tho he was a jerk.  It's clear they are simply out to punish, not to rehabilitate, or they would not have made a carricature out of him or made sure he was revealed as a man.  They are not really teaching him anything as the stares he will be getting are not those of a man at a woman, but those of a man at a man in a dress.  If they wanted to rehabilitate, they should have tried to make him as much like themselves as possible so that he would know what a woman feels like; now he'll only know what a man in a dress feels like.  I'm surprised he's not plotting revenge.  When they let him go to the car, he had his credit card; he should have emptied the nearest ATM machine and kept going.  

I think that some of the femming was maybe a bit over the top for the crime, but it would be fun to see a part 2 explaining how "Daisy" adapts to her new status in the office, and how many more screwups it will take until one of the girls is promoted to his job and he remains an office girl for good, a worse punishment to him than being fired.

I agree with Jezzi that the punishment exceeds the crime.  But, I also agree that it is well written and look forward to reading about further adventures during his period of punishment.

SS

Even though he's a jerk, put me on his side so far because you've written the women as worse.  He IS a jerk and should be taught a lesson, but by making the punishment so way beyond the crime, the girls became to me sadistic punishers rather than redeemers and the asshole has my sympathy and I root for him to find some way to turn the tables on them rather than saying, "Hey, he got what he deserved."  With this type of punishment, I would think they are just going to earn his hatred, not get him to change his ways because he sees the error of them.  They might be able to force him to obey, but a slave who hates you is one you should never sleep easy around.

This is well written, and I look forward to part 2

Be turn up if he just say up your and leaves or goes ts. Lets see where it goes. Might be fun story