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When the Wife is Away, Hubby Will Play
by Marti B

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Comment by bill on 10/03/10
Love the story next chapter should be about what Chris would have done

Comment by CLAIRE on 03/29/10
Great story but don't leave it there. Give us the follow up. Please.

Comment by Silvia. on 11/04/09
I'm sorry, but I didn't like.
It's a bad story.
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 12/21/07
a brilliant story well worth to continue iwould like to how it progress during the week with pat and how much is removed etc before his wife returns a bit of bondage would be great also some blackmailing i would like to read about the return of his wife earlier than  expected and what happens

Comment by WannabeGinger on 02/01/07
I do agree with other comments.... keeping to the self-styling theme is best...... the joys of choosing what is done is,  for me,  half the fun of a salon visit.   This Pat person should be a great lover and an indulgent and skilled hair/beauty stylist.  Janice should come home to find someone at ease with his new femininity but maybe scared of her reaction... which should be kind and at last, indulgent.  Pleeeeease write another chapter, Marti!

Comment by suna on 02/13/06
The story so far was delightful. Going slightly beyond he/r expectations in self-feminization is an excellent beginning.  Please dont change the story from one of small unexpected results to something in the horror genre, having Pat do more than teasing or lite activity in the next few days or having he/r wife return and become a raving dominant will be so sad.  But tis your story.  good luck.

Comment by julie j on 08/06/05
a great story well worth carrying on with it should be an intersting week with pat around and also it should be great when janice comes back i would like to se some bondage in the next part so far brilliant

Comment by anu on 07/24/05
next what happened to marti pls write it soon waiting . i also want to be placed in his/her place and enjoy.

Comment by Missy on 02/01/05
Loved the story, kept wanting to place myself in Marti's position, 'forced' and going all the way.  Loved it!



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