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Whipped
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Steve on 03/03/08
I love the way you develop your stories. I find you writing style simple elegant and a wonder to read.
I realize you are probably writing in other venues..thank you for taking the time to create these wonderfull stories

Comment by Pam on 03/02/08
Jenn-

Great story....more PLEASE!!

xo Pam


Comment by Jaye Anne on 03/01/08
I loved the way this story began and where I hoped it continues to head.  I particularly love the part when hubby integrates with her friends and I hope some more of this continues.  I hope he becomes a woman or woman-like a bit more slowly. And I hope possibly we can learn that some of the friends husbands are also whipped.  I say this wearing my pink CHICKS RULE top I ordered from press cafe which my wife sees and approves as I really am also quite pussywhipped.  Love JA



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