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White Rabbits
by Debbie Cybill

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Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/21/05
think it would have been more interesting if he had become the girl Samantha would have become at age 20 and his girlfriend had not been magically adjustedadjusted.  

I think it was very unfair of samantha's mom not to help him say "White rabbits" first thing.  Since she was aware of the change, she must have wanted a son badly enough not to care what her daughter wanted.

<< The pretty little Samantha was not going to make the same mistake this time round. She loved her pretty clothes. She was anticipating growing up as a girl, to be a teenager, to wearing her first bra, her first prom dress, to wearing makeup for the first time, even to having her first period.  >>

Was the mistake running into witches, or being a tomboy?  Seems like the magic messed with both his and her mind the second time around.  While the from the above it's clear the 2nd Samantha remembered what had happened to the first one, did she remember her life as Sam?  It doesn't seem like it as there seems no grief over losing the girl he loved and his adult life.  The above also indicates that the 2nd samantha is very different personality wise than the tomboy first Samantha - if she wasn't than she would view being a girly girl as necessary to avoid being changed rather than as something desired.

Comment by Lia Monde on 02/11/05
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Comment by Maria Montana on 06/25/01
This is simply one of the most marvellous stories of ANY kind I've ever read! I've a little one just like Samantha and I'm thinking  of telling her a G-rated version of this,sort of as a cautionary tale <grin> :)

Comment by Mr. Ram on 03/13/01
An enjoyable story. I agree,it had a fairytale quality to it. It is hard to write a very short descriptive story without making it seem rushed. This story did not seem rushed.
                         Mr. Ram

Comment by Mr Man on 12/08/00
This was a nice story. It kind of reminded me of a fairy tale sort of. I liked the girl to boy approach, but felt it could have been explored a little more in depth. I also felt the punishment would have been better if society had not adjusted to the changes. Don't get me wrong though, I liked the story and hope you write more in the future. Good luck!

Comment by Nellie D on 12/07/00
A very nice story. The writing is well done with good descriptions. The change from girl to boy is rare but this one works.

Comment by paul jutras on 12/07/00
Though I prefer M2F transformations this F2M story was well done concept and writen well. Keep up the work. Like the transformation bits.

Comment by Emmie Dee on 12/07/00
Lovely story, with a twist that surprised and delighted me. It makes me wonder--what if I say "White Rabbits" when I first wake up on Jan. 1? It's worth a try. Hugs, Emmie



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