(Too) fast and furious - there's a lengthy story here, full of neat (but too quick) surprises.

I think you story was just wonderful, something every TS really wants, including myself. I only wish I had SRS completed when I had the chance. I strongly encourage every TS to gain their rightful body and enjoy their life in the gender they were suppose to be,

Dear Debra,

Like most of your stories here, we have a woman (wife, girl friend, etc) manipulating a young man toward the "joys of womanhood." Only I never figured out "why?" -- I mean, not really, truly a good reason.

I've read comments on your other stories, and I've come up with an idea that may help you furnish greater detail and depth to your efforts.Nearly everyone agrees that they are stories worth telling, but all too often come up short of the mark. If in your next story, you leave your finished product on your computer, then come back to it a week later, I think you will find yourself adding details, motivations, and in general fleshing your story out to be more readily understandable.

Given that time lapse, when you reread (slowly, pausing at the end of each several lines), I think new questions will occur to you in the same sense as they do now to your readers. And satisfying yourself in this fashion will in all likelihood open the road to reader satisfaction.

     Best of luck.      ............    leah