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A Whole New You
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Comment by Aleesha on 09/17/09
Wouldn't it be great if only a hair dressing salon like this existed. I would be first in line to get my haircut. Comment by Sally on 05/31/08 What a great read! Thank you!!!!!!!!! Comment by WannabeGinger on 10/13/06 I've just read this, and several other of your stories and wanted to thank you for the inspiration. Hair is "my thing" and I just love stories with that theme..... so much I've written a first (12 chapters long0 of my own) I'd love to hear your comments on its style and content! Comment by Donna on 03/20/04 Absolutely brilliant in its concept but do please please continue this line of thought - his adventures as Iris - helping in the shops? the ingenuity of the owner should also be extended Comment by Elizabeth Rees on 09/20/03 Guy goes into a hair salon and gets turned into a woman. What a brilliant idea - and so versatile too! You could easily adapt it to other situations. How about 'Guy goes into a supermarket and gets turned into a woman' or 'Guy goes into a car showroom and gets turned into a woman' or 'Guy goes into a bar and gets turned into a woman'...? Comment by MonaR on 09/20/03 Really cute ending (but how true). I enjoyed reading the story. Comment by Cassandra on 09/20/03 Just too nice! I love the quality of your work. This was soooooo much fun to read!! Girls rule!! Comment by Briar on 09/19/03 I had to chuckle at the end. A cruel but well written short tale. Well. they do say that an element of cruelty belongs in humour. And, since everyone ought to realise that there is no such thing as a free lunch, it was his own silly fault! |
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