What a story.. superb writing very simple to read.. I am I am so so eager to read what happened to Erotica and the three beautiful ladies.. please please please please please write the next chapters. So looking forward to seeing what happens in their life...

This is a wonderful story, an easy, fast read, and then.........

Please, PLEASE continue, I can't wait to see what happens next and where this goes, the build up is great, I could swear I know some of those people :)

Please Samantha, pick up your pen again and continue

Pretty please

With Cherries on....

Hi Samantha,
        I have just read part 12 in this truely wonderful series and I ask you to please continue with part 13. This is a very enjoyable read and one that I will read again. It would be nice to see how Freddy, TJ and Judy fare at the exibition. You have a wonderful story line that begs to be continued.

Luv Rose.

Please continue "Who said three's a crowd it excellent"

The new chapters are every bit as good as your original ones.  Thanks for picking up the story again.  Am enjoying every bit of it!

You have a thoroughly charming (enrapturingan and enchanting), piece posted here.  I waited until I thought I might have it all before starting, but now I can see part nine is still in the positioning stage.  You have defined the charactrs marvelously, you have directed the plot cleanly, even the sub plots are open and adding to the main plot.  You have worked this story very well.  I sincerely hope to see more of it soon.  Thank you for sharing it with us

I love your story and can wait for your next chapter.


Cassandra

Ok,
What was the list mom drinking when she posted part five?  It is a duplicate of part four.  If you will quietly just fix the problem I wont have to beat you with a long strand of undercooked spaghetti.

Nora

oops.  You hit the wrong send button!  Chapter 5 is a duplicate of chapter 4.  Don't tease us like that!!

I hope this turns into another long, long adventure! This group sounds like, whats that word, a real hoot!

Certainly no need to apologize; you've left me wanting to know where this is headed and I think a lot of others here feel that way too.

But how did TJ know Mike was going to Australia?  All he said was that he was leaving for four to six weeks; he didn't say where he was going.  And TJ didn't start researching him at the library until after she'd picked up the visa.

<<  before you pour scorn on my creative efforts.>>

No scorn here!  I comment on TJ after part 2, and lo and behold, a whole chapter on her.  I like character development.  You go, girl!

Samantha Michelle, you are creating a wonderful storyline.  This chapter concerning TJ is just as good as the first two chapters.  I can simply say, "More, More, More!".  I wish you had not ended it with that face to face, I did n't want to stop.
As I like to say, "Treasure is found where you least expect".
Adieu,
Cai

I'm been waiting daily for Part 3.
Looking over the comments you've received so far, I don't see any that don't want more.  I think we ALL do.  So start writing!

I can't be more agree with Sheryl S.
This is too good of a story to waste it. Please, continue writing. And thanks so far.

Utterly, utterly charming.  Also totally internally consistent and compelling.  Also, from a technique standpoint, Part II shows some major blossoming on your part, Samantha Michelle.  Possibly, this is because now relieved of the compulsory expository stuff to set the story up, you were free to embody all three of the characters and feel how the mood needed to progress.  I just absolutely loved it.

Now, I need to get stern with you, SM!  I don't want to hear any more of your coy nonsense about whether there will be a Part III.  From the possibilities you just opened and the mystery and attractivenesss of the characters, you've got to go at least to Part V.  This is one of those rare serials that, at least thus far, has significant potential to growing into a novel.  So, get to work.  Your growing legion of fans need to find out more about the roots of TJ's intense anger and Judy's devil-may-care nature. We need to see how things evolve.  Please forgive me for being so pushy, but you have us all dangling and impatient for the next installments.

Love and Hugs,
Sheryl S.

It make's a change to read a story that doesn't contain forsed femm, A writer like you comes along once in a blue moon so please keep this story going, I want to know what Mike does after leaving the girl's and what they get upto with the 10k and how their business goes.

Rebecca

I make a change to read a story that doesn't contain forsed femm, A writer like you comes along once in a blue moon so please keep this story going, I want to know what Mike does after leaving the girl's and what they get upto with the 10k and how their business goes.

Rebecca

What a great 2 part story. I think that you should continue the series and I am looking forward to reading the next installment.
Keep up the good work.

Keep up the good work girl....The trio seem to have opened a whole list of possibilities.  I look forward to more about them in the future.

I loved what you've written so far. Keep up the great work!

What a wonderfully charming little tail, please let's have more.  And please I am really drawn to the characters but let's be honest the clothes are also a big part of why we are here, a little more description of what the gowns in question look like would be devine.

Very nice story. Please continue.

Please Samantha, please continue the story.
Hugs, Fran

A very nice two chapters.  I enjoyed them very much.  Keep the good work flowing please.

I wonder if there is something in the name, Samantha Michelle, that causes her to write such a wonderful story!
 Still a few errors popping up, but a story this nice -- who cares, I'll read through them. "Life can be very lonely for a crossdresser" -- truer words were never spoken or written.
 I hope Mike winds up with both girls!

Now Samantha, you can't leave this story unfinished like this..that is cruel and inhuman punishment....please give Us a part 3 to tie the ends up...please?

I really enjoyed your trio story. Please continue the adventures. Excellemt read! Thank you for your effort.

After part 2:
Interesting concept, and I'm certainly anxious to read more.  My reservations:  1)  TJ's turnaround just seemed way too easy; I think more conflict with her before her "conversion" would have helped the story.  Also, (2)  given her suspicious nature, her not reading Mike was sort of a stretch.  

Very well done, I do so hope you will continue to write more about this fascinating trio. Thanks for a good read.

great story... but please dont leave it there... its like watching the pilot episode for a tv (no pun intended) series.... and then them not making any more episodes which is not good lol..

Very good so far.  Cute and intriguing -- not that common a combination.  Looking forward to the rest.

What a marvelous start -- very witty with a wry sense of humor.  Narrator/star Freddie borders perhaps a bit too much on the omniscient which is fine for a third-party narrator but might get in the way a bit for a first-party one. But that's minor.  Just loved the car, and the fashions.  TJ seems quite interesting, which to find out more.  I await more of your genius.

Huggles,
Sheryl S.

Interesting, very interesting, had me guessing there at the start, I shall be checking on this to see what direction it takes.  Thank you

Well, I've got it on disc. I'll read it later -- but, the start does look interesting!
   The few models I've seen on tv are rather thin. And the clothes looked like they were designed to cover up the best parts (I do have a preference for the hair and eyes).
   The "miss"spellings seem to be few, altho edwware is later edgeware (we all do that). Can't wait for next part -- hope the three get together, after all three's not a crowd, but a family.