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Whose Body Is It, Anyway?
by Brandy Dewinter

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Comment by Sarita on 07/11/12
Haha!  I know what you mean.  There's a fine line, isn't there?I want to try one next year.  I'd better start thnnkiig about how exactly I'm going to make it right now.   You always forget what a pain it is to make a gingerbread house entirely from scratch until you're elbow-deep in royal icing and misshapen walls.

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 07/31/07
NOW THAT I HAVE READ THE ORIGINAL XORA ADVENTURE, I MUST ADMIT THAT YOU DO HAVE A WICKED SENSE OF HUMOR. I MEAN TURNING A MAN INTO A WOMAN , THEN INTO A CALL GIRL? WHAT IS NEXT?  PLAYBOY BUNNY OR HOOTER GIRL ADVENTURE? SORRY BRANDY GIRL, BUT YOU HAVE BROUGHT OUT THE SENSE OF THE RIDICULOUS IN ME. I LOVE IT.

Comment by Molly on 01/18/07
Not even funny as a satire, and it's far too ludicrous to be anything else. Perhaps some prankster posted it under Brandy's name as a practical joke, it is so qualitatively different from her other work-- everything else of hers that I have read so far is fit to be published in hard cover with library bindings... I don't think I'll be reading the sequel...

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 04/14/05
   I see the screen in front of me as Brandy's canvas as she paints so vividly and so clearly for all who have eyes to see.  There is remarkable insight here and some of the best writing you will ever see, anywhere. I have started a lot of different stories by other authors and many I have dropped part way through. This story draws me back inexorably and I feast on it yet another time.

   Whose Body Is It Anyway is a joy to read. I cannot recommend it more highly. If you have a vivid imagination and a love of a crisply told tale that is close to the heart with plenty of humorous banter, and yes the old standby, love, this tale will amaze you.

   Kristi

Comment by Traci Klawes on 09/12/01
Ms. Dewinter seems to have true talent in every area she has displayed.  Well written stories are highlighted by just as welldrawn artwork.  Her charracters are definitely as three-dimensional as the pictures suggest.

Comment by Rose2 on 08/11/01
When I dream I want to be a Character of Brandy's.  When I write I want to write like her.  If I could draw I would like to draw like her.  Miss these stories at your own peril.

Comment by Mr Man on 08/05/01
Good stuff once again Brandy, you are a very gifted author. I encourage everyone to read this and all of you other stories. Keep up the good work.



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