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Who's The Boss
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Lee lee on 01/03/08
Ah  I do not like fake stories like this....but  as I kept reading I had the strange feeling that in real life my wife has acatually ( in a virtual sense) emasculated me for her service. No hormones but then again no need for testosterone. She did not complain when she found me wearing panties  and even bought me some of my own. And as time went by I took over all the household chores..etc etc etc  so suddenly this story made sense to me and I too found my self getting a hard on and not having any use for it.   In fiction there lies a grain of truth   thanks for the story  

Comment by Eileen on 09/13/07
Jennifer, dear, you write some of the greatest TG stories anywhere.  I'd put you up with the Top Five of all-time greats. Your material is well-written, well characterized and paced, the dialogue flawless and the situations often quite believable.

I have a suggestion you could run with, a different spin on the boss-to-secretary bit--more of a fun spin on femdom.  He and his wife own the company. She has 51% but doesn't participate in it. He's stressed, frazzled and increasingly out of sorts with stress-related health problems that worry his wife.  His judgment is also slipping His secretary is a trusted associate and one day they get into an argument about who has the more difficult job, her maintaining she does, him maintaining he does.  It finally comes to a bet. They will totally reverse roles, drawing up legal papers that put her in charge and him subordinate.  His wife steps in at that point. If his secretary wins, she gets a piece of the company. He doesn't expect it to happen and signs off.

Soon he finds he's committed to dressing the part, his wife taking him shopping for full-figured business outfits and her sister, a beautician gleefully playing along, shears off his goatee and ponytail leaving him with a short pixie cut that makes him look the attractive middle-aged female assistant.

His secretary, of course, wins and winds up a co-owner and in the end he enjoys the secretarial duties and his wife enjoys him en femme, sort of like your "Women in the News" piece at FM.

If you think it worth using, you're free to do it.


Comment by Alison on 08/26/07
WOW what a great great story, i would love this to happen to me honey, but alas i will just have to be alison when i can here in minnesota, kisses and keep up the good work



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