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Why Can't A Boy Be More Like A Girl?
by Angel O'Hare

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Comment by jenny on 10/23/10

wonderful story just wish there was more to it.any chance of it being finished.hopefully soon jenny

Comment by jenny on 10/23/10

wonderful story just wish there was more to it.any chance of it being finished.hopefully

Comment by Silvia. on 06/27/10

This is a terror story.
Silvia.

Comment by c on 02/26/07

Part 1 doesn't open :(

Comment by Melissa D. on 11/21/06

Another of your great storys, again unfinnished i can not wait to see how this one ends. I must say you are a very fine writer.
LadyCat

Comment by joanne on 01/14/06

oh angel!

Please continue this story .I love the way you write your pre & teen tg stories.The stories have a way in them that is more realistic and a plot than most of the other stories.There is so many good to great stories that are unfinish that it makes me said when i find a story that is left unfinsh.

lov

Comment by Rone on 11/16/05

Yes You are an angel with this writing....very well done
good clean fun ,,,,,great reading .....when is THE REST OF THE STORY going to bless our eyes???? please advise ...Rone

Comment by Renee on 08/09/05

Oh brother talk about a GREAT story. The words to discribe this story haven't even been invented yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I didn't think I would EVER read stories that affected me like Catlin Roses stories did AGAIN after he QUIT.

BOY WAS I WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ps I am a shutin (ALMOST) and all I do ALL DAY, EVERY DAY is read storie.

My favorites are about HAIR/PREETEEN
Can you recommend authors that write about that subject matter?

Comment by Francine on 09/12/04

Hi Angel :)

Yes! This is a delightful story and you write so well.

Hugs, Fran

Comment by Languish on 09/12/04

Simply great, please continue and keep up the great work!

Comment by thin on 09/11/04

I have to say that Angel Is My FAVORITE author . I cant waite till her next story or storys comes out . She keeps me engrossed in her characters and plot

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 09/08/04

Thank You Languish,

You will be happy to know that I have submitted several chapters of this story to Crystal. She has so many stories to post, that I was surprised to see my story posted so quickly. THANK YOU CRYSTAL!!!

Huggles
Angel

Comment by Languish on 09/08/04

That was a great begining. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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