A wonderful story and Bayen is a wonderful writer.
Her name should not be indexed as just 'Sarah'.

I had to read this story twice... It was quite different than the standard femdom story.  After the second time I realized it wasnt a femdom story after all... it is a COMEDY !!
The twisting of roles is not the story, it is the blind driving force of an unreal orgasm that will shape the downfall of mankind.  
I can see the alien spaceships landing .. in only a couple generations we have ended the race.

It was great!!

This was a wonderfully well written story. It very cleverly shows a plausible change in mores brought about by an instrument that empowers woman at the expense of men.

Thanks for writing and posting it.

SS

as maurice chevallier once sang.... "thank heaven for little girls!...."  lol.. seroiusly a brilliant story... at this point in time i've read most of the works you've posted here.  you have a genuine gift.. being able to totally take the reader away.. you are a "role reversal" genius... in a sense though, i am saddened.  too often "one" gender always seems to have it "over" the other... it doesn't have to be that way.  

i honestly find myself wondering whether you were "born" male or female...lol, and no, it doesn't matter.  still, you're perspective and insight leave me in doubt...

i'd like to seriously thank you though for writing thought provoking and loving stories... seriously, you are among the "best"

always,
joan...

p.s., not sure if this is a british thing or not.. but?.. you often use "loosing" when you mean "losing"...  ahhh, i am loosing my train of thought here!.. lol...

I just love this story, I paticularly like the institutional role reversal in it.

Well done! and please please lots more boys in girls roles and perhaps the less common girls in boys roles, perhaps set in the future; alternate reality; new world order etc.

I just love the stepford wives type ending where the destiny is finaly accepted with just a hint of domination over the fragile pretty boy.

Since reading this I am going through all of your other work, and realy enjoying it, Please be encoraged, I have some Role Reversal TG  stories on fictionmania ( I would love to hear what you think of them) and I know it is hard work to write so I have only admiration for you imagination and hard work.

Love and God Bless

Sorry Jezzi - any offence caused was entirely accidental.

In UK boys' names are often cut in this way. Jeremy becomes Jez or Jezza; Gavin - Gaz/Gazza: Barry - Baz/Bazza.


Love from Sarah

I enjoyed this very creative story except that Jez IS NOT a boy's name!  (Well, not in the USA - I suppose if you Brits can use Beverly and such as boys names maybe you use Jez, too.)

just teasing - the story IS very creative and I enjoyed the other 99.9% of it  :-)