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Wicca Magik
by Wholeman

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Comment by Elmer on 07/09/12
PABLO (chihuahua) and STUMPY (petite basset grffion vendeen) are 2 very particular pups about their boarding experiences.Dancing Creek has far been the best we have encountered.We appreciate the special attention to our little guys;we have always had large dogs in the past,so dealing with little dog routines is fairing new to us.We love that PABLO can play with other dogs,and I'm sure STUMPY likes the break from being PABLO'S big brother.We are all happy with DCF;it is a one-of-a-kind home away from home for our pets.THANKS TO ALL OF YOU-KATE.

Comment by k mixon on 05/20/08
I really like this one. It makes me hot,and there is a certain
fasination with it. I would love to live this one out in real
life.

Comment by d on 02/07/05
very hot stuff, great little short story, loved the twists,loved the lusty descriptions, would love to be magically transformed into the story. first read of your stuff and looking forward to more. made me quite wet.

Comment by Dave H on 06/07/03
Definately one of your better stories - at least from my viewpoint.  It's so much better when the author has the same tastes as the reader, isn't it?  Love the big boobs.  When I read a story about 'AA' cups, I wonder why they even bothered in the first place.  Sounds more like a type of battery than a bra size to me.  Great work and thoroughly enjoyable.  More!  Encore!  And thanks for sharing it with us.

Comment by MonaR on 11/13/02
Nicely done.  I really liked this one; I'm anxiously your next story.

Comment by Krissy on 11/12/02
That was fun! :)
Do I dare wish to make mistakes like that?

Comment by Chrisl on 11/11/02
Thanks for a neat story, I especially like the way their love is kept safe. Very erotic and all good fun :)

Comment by beth on 11/10/02
great story, thank you so much. I really loved the little twists, like being made shorter:)
thanks *HUG*

Comment by Annie O on 11/10/02
Blessed Be!

Eight words the Wiccan rede fullfil, an it harm none do as ye will.

Comment by Richie Sambora on 11/10/02
Pretty hot stuff here. I give it 6.5 out of 10.



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