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Wife Takes Charge Forever!
by Slav2femme

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Comment by best pron on 10/25/19
nnqO5y Utterly   pent   articles ,  regards  for  selective information.

Comment by i love pron on 04/19/19
XbAh60 pretty helpful stuff, overall I think this is worthy of a bookmark, thanks

Comment by mia pron khalifa on 04/15/19
96b31j It as nearly impossible to find knowledgeable people in this particular subject, but you seem like you know what you are talking about! Thanks

Comment by suba zupa on 08/12/18
rU0dYL I was looking for this particular information for a very long time.

Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
bYuw00 A big thank you for your article post.Really looking forward to read more. Want more.

Comment by Satin Cuck on 05/14/14
I really loved the story! What a wild yet very lustful fantasy for me. Thanks for that!

Comment by Joln on 12/17/13
Story; Wife takes Charge forever, Am I to understand that Gregg is perhaps the black man in the video? This story was written in 2004, it's now to the end of 2013.  would have loved to read the second part as you ended the first story with end of part one. Please let me know that there is a part two or three that you didn't leave all your readers in the air hanging?

Comment by Elking on 07/12/12
That's so sweet. I have a feeling that Landen and Adellyn will be like that sdomeay.  They have about the same age difference as your kids...17 months to the day.  He already loves to give her kisses and wants to pick her up when she is crying!

Comment by Silvia. on 07/03/12
RIDICULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 01/26/09
Sounds as if Mistress Sarafina has some very interesting plans for her new maid. Nicely done . . . though the switch midway from a first person to third person account and then back again was a bit offsetting, it was a minor thing that certainly did not lessen my enjoyment thinking about of maid alana's future.

Comment by slavetoby on 01/01/09
This is an excellent story. I loved every moment,every detail. I really hope you will continue with this. A great start to a long series

Comment by prancyann on 07/15/07
Pretty good story, but you REALLY, REALLY need to think PARAGRAPHS.

Your stories are very hard to read with those giant paragraphs.


Comment by rori on 02/14/07
excellent concept but shemale development too rapid to be totally convincing

Comment by juliej on 01/13/07
a good story but needs more next part please

Comment by  Sissy  julia on 06/16/06
Fantastic,when can we read part 2. Cant wait.

Comment by Paula on 02/07/06
I await the second installment, or follow-up eagerly.  I constantly do a search on the author and are dismayed to come up with just the one item every time This one.

Comment by Emmaline on 12/09/05
Lovely story Slave2femme.  I love the woman's psych history playing into her need to dominate her spouse with great gusto.  Of course it is not clear from what you write whether she actually loved him or just said those things to make what she intended to do be accepted more easily- and foolishly.   She repeats her love when he is frightened by all the legal paper he has signed giving her everything including his sissy self.  I know she will use and abuse our hero (ine) constantly and creatively and he will beg for more.
Thanks for sharing this with us
Lovely hug
Emmy

Comment by Master James on 11/16/05
An exelent story.

Comment by gawl on 11/14/05
It was great, please keep them coming!

Comment by subdued on 04/17/05
Delicious story. It's true that a Dominant Woman can spot a sub from the most superficial contact. The alternating use of humiliation and sexual reward is perfect. I hope there will be a part 2.

Comment by codetogo on 04/09/05
extremely hot story, anxiously awaiting part 2

Comment by Sissy Dyann on 12/24/04
 A great story. I can't wait for part 2. Keep up the good work

Comment by left2000 on 11/29/04
I liked the story very much. It was just a little long.

Comment by julie j on 11/10/04
the story was great well written and explained the poor guy was tricked and signed away everything he owned what an idiot but i supose that what he wanted well written

Comment by Sissy Patsey Belle on 08/31/04
Excellent Story! I particularly enjoyed the juxtaposition between trust and vulnerability but probably the most heart stopping moments were the moments of love and acceptance for what is in the soul of the individual. By trust and vulnerability I refer to his trust of her and his vulnerability in her hands. By love and acceptance I refer to her love and acceptance of his non-traditional non-masculine needs. No greater need hath mankind but love and acceptance of all of our warts and scars. Sissy Patsey Belle

Comment by jenniffer on 08/09/04
Fabulous!  Please write more!

Comment by SassySue on 06/20/04
I agree that this is a great start to a promising story line.

Keep up the good work.

SS

Comment by mr on 06/16/04
excellent start to the story, with a lot of promise for the future installments.  can't wait for the transformation to begin in earnest.



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