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Wishes
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Great Sage on 02/23/09
Very clever and original transformation - liked the twist. Be careful of what you wish for indeed.

Comment by Hydie on 10/05/08
Something that would never happen. Dreams don't always come true.

Comment by Rachel Rae on 04/22/04
My, you are such a prolific writer with a entire different theme to your stories.  Although I like personal experience stories the best, I'm willing to be introduced to different situations as a means of expanding my horizons.  Thank you much.

Comment by leah on 05/27/03
I believe that this is the first of Jennifer's stories that I have read, but they may become a project, because I'm really impressed by "Wishes."

All through the story I was worried about the existence of the original Erin as our fairy-godmother-enabled man took part in her life and then looked as though he were on the way to a complete takeover.

Now, instead of that, I get to ponder the existence of the interloper. Well, life is rarely easy, but that doesn't mean it's not interesting.

     leah



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