Heck yeah this is exactly what I neeedd.

The tale is well written and sexy (in a rape/revenge-fantasy sort of way). But the author tries to have it both ways, and it shows.

Tina, the leading lady, spends the entire story setting up Bill (her abusive boyfriend) to be gang raped to teach him a lesson about what it's like to to be abused as a woman. She goes so far as to magically turn him into a woman, dress him up to look sexually attractive, introduces him to the potential rapists as a new girl, then she lies to the men gets and them drunk to persuade them to gang rape him. She has planned the gang rape in such detail that she even brings masks, a blindfold and tape.

But then the author chickens out. It seems she can't bring herself to have her leading lady be quite that sadistic (or perhaps to admit to herself that this sort of thing turns her on, which it obviously does), so she makes Tina have second thoughts once the rape has begun.

Tina doesn't watch, but she doesn't try to stop it, either - she just walks around outside for half an hour while she lets the four men inside have their way with Bill (now "Candy").  We are supposed to believe that Tina is shocked and "heartsick" when she opens the door and sees Bill on his knees being sodomized (and later, orally raped), as if she would have never expected such a thing from four drunken, angry rapists. Suddenly, the four men she hired to rape him are supposed to be the bad guys, while Tina who planned it all, is suddenly pictured as a sympathetic woman.

Since Tina is pictured getting horny just thinking about her fantasy of her husband being raped, this late twist is simply unbelievable and self-serving. It would have been more honest for the author to have Tina take responsibility for her actions, and more in character to have Tina take smug satisfaction (perhaps glee) watching the assault she planned in such detail.  As it is, the author tries to have it both ways: Tina gets to peek in and see Bill being brutalized, yet she is allowed to complain that it's gone too far.  If women want to write sexy rape-revenge stories, they should accept that the force & abuse they fantasize about is part of their own (female) fantasy and not the product of some outside (male) excess.

Something totally different in the way this story was done as the style or shall I say the formula for the story as it is quite evident that Jacki has taken another path with this tale of Feminization.

In this story Jacki has a a guy who just doesn't know how to treat a woman and when he's drunk he reacts by using force. What takes place is that a chance to make things happen where he is transformed into a beautiful girl.

With the help of a woman who can help his partner make the necessary change by use of herbs which can change this guy into a female. This transformation takes place in a relatively short time span and the resulting effect is nothing short of spectacular.

Jacki, is a very talented author and even though she has not authored a story lately, her stories that are posted here show just how much she has to offer all of us who take the time to read her works. She continues to show her skills and her abilities as an author. I'm sure that she will soon take a break and let us see some more of her lovely works as she gets back into the authors chair.

A very engaging story that I totally enjoyed reading just as the other stories that Jacki has written. It's a wonderful thing that someone as talented as Jacki that she has given us so many delightful stories to read.

Diane

A welcome diversion into the realm of magical transformation as well written as the previous stories. The subject becomes a genetic woman, the plot is great and competently manipulated towards a romantic and happy ending. Well done again and thank you

I recently read your short story and was amazed at how well written it was.  I have to be honest and tell you that I was forced to read it at first. But, after I started I had to finish it. My wife has feminized me to the point, that no one would reconize me now. I understand what the character must have felt when he realized he was feminized. It has taken my wife almost two years to complete what she has started and the results were quite definately that of a woman now. I hope you continue to write these stories because it seems to give me a little comfort that I am not alone anymore. I realize that this is supposed to be fiction, but it does happen in real life.