intresting story

nice twist at the end though I could see it coming - - -

This is a bad story as always!
Silvia.

Great story. However, the two ladies should have kept Elliot/Eli as their maid for few weeks to really teach the dumb bunny a lesson. As it turns out, Dave would have been there anxious to replace Eli as their maid and plaything once they were through punishing Eli. Overall, a very good story. I think I need to get one of those zappers for my sissy maid, Priscilla Ann -- just for the fun of it.

a brilliant story with a heck of a rwist what a way to go well doneyou have a great knack of writing so hopefuly you will put more stoy on this net brilliant many thanks

this was a good story with a twist in the tail seemed like it was all a set up intresting that his mate wanted to be the maid well done

I'm glad to see you writing again!  

I liked this story; it certainly took the road less traveled with the original twist at the end, and it seemed like a happy ending where everybody won.  Olivia and Deb got each other, Dave got to be a maid as he desired, and Elliot got off light with only a day's punishment and no permanent humiliation.  However, I wonder how Deb feels about Elliot not taking them up on their offer, as she had hoped, maybe even expected, that he would.  She seemed disappointed and I could see a sequel where she went after him.  My advice to Elliot would be to quickly go far, far away with no forwarding address ... and to never, ever again piss off the ladies.