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A Woman's Love
by Dave Hicks

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Comment by Coralie on 12/13/11
Please keep torwhing these posts up they help tons.

Comment by Diane M on 05/29/08
Engrossing, ethereal. Possible?

Comment by Yoron on 05/24/08
I totally agree with you on this.
you just took what I've already seen to many 'dream' about on this site to Its logical conclusion.

The funniest thing about it is that people seems to accept it instead of seeing it for what it is.

Extremely black humor..
It kind of scares me that they do though..

As I still have my own two fully functioning :)

Cheers
Yoron.


Comment by Dianna on 03/25/08
oddly I was only half annoyed by this. I liked how David loved his wife dearly, but I really can't see her love in return. I wouldn't exactly call what she has lust but more like...sadistic curiosity, and a control complex taken well beyond the norm.

Comment by Michaela on 08/05/04
I love the conversation between the women.
Itīs a thrilling phantasie of beeing forced into a bizarr living sex-toy - fully biolocial autonom working - but also under total control.
Thankīs for it.

Really - if there is any woman here reading this - contact me, if you want set scenarios like this into reality.

Michaela TV

Comment by J on 07/12/04
great story. really love the how his mom takes control. When can I expect part II???

Comment by Terri on 06/11/03
Hey! Another original treatment of what can be a worn-out theme. The mixture of forced fem, futuristic setting, and the chilling way in which it was done made a great combination. The scene where he awakens and she tells him that she's regressed his mental age to that of a child- permanently- was very effective.

Comment by Sara on 06/11/03
Great story!!!!! I love the control part. I would love a prequel to show how she was able to start controling David.

This story touched me. Please continue....

Sara



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