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Woman's Work
by Karen Elizabeth L.

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Comment by jjconn on 05/23/17
these men were tortured not punished because when punishment ends you go back to see if you learned a lesson not turn into bigger sexxists than their husbands ever were & make their punishment permanent so the wives could cheat on them so they could feel good about like they did nothing wrong if they just wanted different get a divorce instead of making them beleave a LIE that it's OK for the men instead of ruining their lives!!!!!
Comment by Maryjane on 04/29/14
Great fiction, I really enjoyed reading it, where can I find this hipnotise?
Comment by Ahmed on 01/08/13
And I was just wdonering about that too!
Comment by Silvia. on 05/10/09
I'm sorry, but this story isn't your writing type. I don't like anything forced.
I'm sorry, but I didn't like the story.
Silvia.
Comment by Dianna on 04/20/08
Hun, drop the 'sweet and sentimental' tag. Because it's a bold-faced lie. Yes I'm mad, I HATE stories like this! I wanted a nice story, not something like...this. I'm not mad at you per-se just...mad at your character's. So please, get rid of the 'sweet and sentimental' tag. Because it's  not accurate at all.
Comment by suna on 11/13/06
As well written as the story may be it is NOT sweet or sentimental...
It IS forced fem in the most wicked way.  
Mind twisting deciet of the highest order.
The guy would have been better off fetching sticks, at least he would have a chance to be loved instead of used as a toy.
Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/30/03
Love the story my dear
Comment by Donna on 10/05/01
    I love the tension that is created when a wife convinces her husband that he is a macho individual while he is wearing female attire. He knows he's a man,  at times tries to resist, yet doesn't know why he is  excited to continue with his feminization. The unique touch is that she does not humiliate him but continues to make him adhere to her agenda. I especially like the fact that this author does not use graphic sex.
    The plot is always being advanced and the story is of a nice length. Please continue with work of this nature.
Comment by KJ on 10/05/01
Like many of the author's stories, is a great idea.

Still have trouble with such changes without the use of magic or sci-fi.

Would like to have seen more epilogue also.
Comment by Paula Jutras on 10/04/01
love the story especially the nice touch of Kathy Brother Paul


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