I absolutely loved it.  Hope that there is more to come.

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Mistress Christine sounds like my kind of woman. And it sounds as if mandy had better do a good job doing "women's work" because I have a feeling mandy will suffer some very severe and humiliating punishments if she fails to perform her "women's work" to perfection. More, please.

a great story where is part two please

I loved the brginning.. but that's all it is...... More please,  (if you're still writing!)  By the way,  Ami Lamida is a fine one to criticize grammar - he/she can't even spell the word!!

again i have reread this story its getting me on edge to wait untill the next part how before you print it is starting to get exciting more please

again i have reread this story its interesting state of affairs but does steve really know what he wants please next part sooon.

re read the story again a great start to what looks like turning into a great story more please

As a Mandee, I of course loved your story.  Women physically overpowering their wayward husbands and then keeping that power exchange through feminization and subjugation of him is just such an exciting concept.  And you write about it in such a believable fashion.  Please contine when you have the time for a worshipful audience.
Hugs
Mandee

this is the start of a great story i feel will be worth the wait i would like to read the next part so please write the next part i realise it needs a lot of thinking about but well done so far

It's been 9 months, but I still hope this is continued, as i really am lookinhg forward to a detailed head to toe makeover scene.  I would hope the wife is out for reformatiopn rather than just punishmsnt for punishment's sake.  Role reversal would be good with equality very gradually established.

I find this thrilling but please continue

Really enjoyed this - hope you continue!! Would love to see him in a lovely apron and rubber gloves - her slave!!

Really like your story very much!!  I cannot say how much I look forward to a continuence of this storyline.  Please do make a sequel!!!

I agree with all of the prior comments ... a great beginning to a story that has much promise ... as I truly love these stories where the tables are turned ... where the wife exerts her latent inherent dominance ... and does not back down from her desire to feminize her husband and making him endure everything feminine while she controls him every high heeled step of the way.  Push the limits ... and don't forget to have him wearing an inescapable chastity belt as she holds the key.

This is a most awesome story, the beginning if which is well played.  No overstepping on the part of either party, and quite believable.

I like your style, Mandy!

Hugz & Stuff,
Ash

You've made a very good start to your story.  The premise is mostly plausable, though I would have liked to know more about Christine's background to better understand her rage.  Perhaps you can develop that in flashbacks in future chapters.  Generally well-written, but could use a bit of touch-up by a good editor.  Spelling was good, but grammer and punctuation needed some work.  Example: "I heard Christine returning she walked past the cupboard and into the kitchen my stomach was turning I was genuinely scared."  That should have been divided into three or four separate sentences.

Regardless, this is a good start.  I look forward to the next installment.  This story has the potential to be a long running series, so keep it going!

-Ami

A great beginning. Please write a sequel.  I really like the wifes character.  Just the right amount of dominance and vengence minded.  Hopefully she will continue his feminization to the point of losing his job and becoming a full-time house-wife or maid....  

More Please <Curtsy>