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The Woman Within, The Woman Is Out
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Comment by WannabeGinger on 04/15/10
I love stories of willing transformations... there's no doubt that the writer wanted things to go this way and there's a happy ending... yes, I'd have liked a lot more detail - especially of a seduction... rather than an outright and dominant instruction... by the wife...... Comment by DaphneNpanties on 07/29/09 Very well written with nice twist of CD wedding. Again the writer assumes the husband is going to want to dress 16/8 on work days and 24 on the weekends. More detail/depth is needed to explain why the husband would agree to or want this. Did the husband want this? Maybe the husband just wanted to roleplay. Did the wife demand this to continue the marriage? What was discussed between the husband and wife. Comment by CATHY ANGELA DOUGLAS on 07/31/08 very good Comment by Jeanette on 07/30/08 Loved the story its the acceptance and fun that shines through, Comment by dee on 09/11/07 great story for the dreamful and hopeful cd. love your story Comment by SassySue on 06/30/05 A very nice, sweet story, one that matches my and, I assume, every other heterosexual CD's dream to be forcably feminized, but not humiliated, by his wife. Personally, I would have preferred more details, especially of the love making. I guess I have to use my imagination. |
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