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Women and General
by Peter Joseph

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Comment by Silvia. on 04/08/10
Oh, GOD! What a bad story you wrote!
Silvia.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 05/22/03
I am really sorry!  I just read my comment and realized what a spoiler it is.  I really apologize to you who read the comments before the stories.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 05/22/03
This seems to be pretty much "Pruestail" in a different setting:  men turned into whores because real women wouldn't be as entusiastic whores, although no racial motivation this time.   At least here there's more evidence that some form of mind control is keeping the guys compliant and submissive.  I would have liked to see Pete be able to break the conditioning long enough to warn James and help him escape, and then see what happened to Pete.

Comment by Axanar on 05/22/03
Loved it.  Well done and exceedingly well thought out.  Try a boss-secretary situation some time.  And I love the stories with the mandatory uniforms.  Must be a British thing, but it's cool!

Comment by Paula on 05/21/03
Not sure if the guy deserved to be changed or if he learned to like it but the whole thing was well written and a joy to read.  



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