This is story needs an update from say around 2 years after this story concludes.

How was the Wonderland Company doing and how had Alice fitted into her role.  Had the public taken to her with her brand of clothing?

Was the clothing now a fashion statement to some extent?

I would be interested in how the sleeping arrangements came along.  Did the house staff also take turns in sleeping with Alice or did she now have a permanent girl?

Did Alice ever go out as a male?

Did the stores stock an Alice costume for young girls to wear and did they have a wall in the shop with a Wonderland scene on it so parents could take a picture of their little girl trying on the Alice clothes or for any one trying general clothing on.

Did Alice have any near misses as to her gender being discovered?

I reread the story, Why the women disclosed Alice's true sex? This weren't necessary! That was embarrassing for Alice. This was EVIL! The women were very bad.

    EMMMMM I wish  I was David !!!!!! (Alice ) What a wonderful story . I wish you would write a full lenth  novel ,on the sau lines  as this  or Tj experiment
I love  your stories .

No humiliation, no evil women, and nothing forced. GOOD!
Silvia.

Nice start... just found Party 1 on a "This Day" facility in Storysite.....  Easy to miss good stories and it's nice to catch them - years later!  I love the theme....... and look forward to reading more chapters.   Hair today,  come back tomorrow!
LOL WbG xx

i was very intrested with this story it was well written very enjoyable and happy well done

this is a great story full of frills it was intresting how well dave got paid abnd benifits no threats etc just a nice little job of work when can i join  great story well written

i really loved this story, it kinda seems so close to what i wish would happen. i mean i'de love to end with a job that requierd to be a girl when i am not. as many have said it does need a little more on the end, it was like someone dumped water on the camp fire before the smores wher done

Annie I just love all your stories and the messages you try to get across; we are what we are! Alice is my kind of girl. Many thanks

I just loved this story, but I was disappointed like many of the others that it ended when there was lots of room to continue the storie.  I read this story in one day and I want to say keep up the good work.

This story is absolutely delightful! I just spent almost all day reading the whole thing, and I feel as if I'm in Wonderland with you and Alice. Very well written, nice touches of humor and sentiment, and I think you managed to push almost all of my personal buttons.

One minor fault is that your true gender shows through in your detailed directions in driving from place to place. Girls and women tend to navigate by landmarks and be less aware of actual distances.

I really think you should consider adding a few more chapters to this: Alice's first store opening, a design planning session for the next year's spring fashion lineup at Wonderland, maybe an interview/modeling session for one of the teen magazines with the interviewing done by a panel of teen girls, and some sort of big party after all of the women/girls have really gotten to know and be truly comfortable with each other. You might want to do these as anniversary events in Alice's career.

This was a true joy to read, and will be on my list for many future re-reads!

Frilliette

I very much enjoyed the story. But, as some others pointed out, it ended to soon.

it is too bad that you ended the storywith only 7 Parts. However, this was another good story, one that should be a continuing serial.

Barb

Count on Ann O' to give us a gentle, loving story.

Just my cup of tea.

Thanks for the sweat reading.

(After reading Part 7:) A terrific job!  So nice to see a story
worked out this way, sweet, feminine, yet believable.  Richly
satisfying; one of your best efforts to date.
.
--Pervy

I really like the way Dave is enjoying being Alice - no guilt or embarrassment - yet still managing to hang on to HIS identity too.  Dave and Alice make a good team; I and my alter ego, Bob, can really identify with them.

please win the lottery give up your day job and write full time.
Hugs Chrisl

Are we lucky or blessed?  Good job walking that fine line between "sweet/sentimental" and so sweet you go into insulin shock.  Just enough 'will he be found out?' to keep him careful, but controlled so nothing goes wrong.  Have these ladies studied Aunt Jane's methods, or did they figure these 'controlled exposure' methods out themselves?

Eagerly awaiting next installment, while enjoying and appreciating those available.

KR
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thanks for the latest installment, the kind, gentle and loving natures are good food for the soul.
Hugs Chrisl.  

A great third and forth part. This is building up to a superb series.

Comment on Part 3.  Oh, my God do I LOVE this story!  Annie keep going please.  I wish this was me!

Well done to this point and looking forward to a great 3rd part. I know it's going to be just as wonderful and the first 2.

Diane

One question about Part 2: At one point, it says, "Dave fell
into..."  But isn't Dave the narrator?  So shouldn't it say, "I
fell into..."?

--Pervy

A great second part that superbly follows on from the first with out any gaps. This to be continued is a ust.

Were I a dominant, I'd say the only way you get out of writing part 3 and following is a doctor-documented illness totally preventing you from continuing to write.  As it is, I humbly request that you continue this story until its logical conclusion, which I hope is dozens of episodes away.

Just the right level of push; Jan's *asking*, not forcing, and giving Dave several chances to back out or slow down.

Good Job!

KR

To be continued?  You BETTER continue it, Annie!

Thankyou,

Great second part I especially liked the  "Just think of yourself as a male lesbian." comment wonder why? :)

I seem to be checking storysite for updates lot's lately.

Thanks again, Hugs, Chrisl

A great first part. How I wish that my sisters were like  that.
Please bring on the next part.

I agree with the foregoing.

Looking forward to the next 10+ chapters!

Zip

I am going to love this!  First, it's one of my favorite genres.
But also, this is a typical Janet Stickney scenario, & it's
fascinating to see how utterly different your handling of it is.
Much more humor & irony, for one thing, & the boy's attraction to
this new mode of living has been no more than hinted at so far.
Janet's good, of course, & so are you; but you're both good in
different ways.  (You're both favorite authors of mine.)  I'll bet
Janet's going to enjoy following this, too.

Pervy

Nice story, no humiliation stuff.  I am looking forward to parts 2 and ??.  I would have liked the hair scene stretched ou with him/her describing the feeling of the rollers being applied, etc., but all in all, great job!

Nice story, no humiliation stuff.  I am looking forward to parts 2 and ??.  I would have liked the hair scene stretched ou with him/her describing the feeling of the rollers being applied, etc., but all in all, good job!

Stories like this are why is you are one of my absolute favorite writers on this site.

Nice fantasy, I really like the beginning, a loving sister, nice friends and Dave is a central character I am enjoying identifying with :)  Pretty please may I have some more?
Hugs, Chrisl