Not the ending, if it had been me. I would have told the wife I've kept my word and see you in court, As for the boss it would have been poke your job.

Sylvia...REALLY? This is a magnificent story. I am now convinced that you do not read the stories that you review. I have to hand it to you I have never even dreamt there were so many ways to demonstrate you have nothing substantive to say.

I loved your story, it wasn't vindictive like many are,I really like stories that are about Feminization where they end in mutual love.not in humiliation or debasement or replacing the feminized male with a "real man". those are terrible stories, They show that the wife has no love for her spouse at all.Thank You for writing such a Beautiful Story. J

I'm sorry again, but what Sarah and Edith deserve is humiliation and suffering by the rest of their lives, and never forgiveness.
This is what I think.
Silvia.

THIS IS A REAL TEAR JERKER. GREAT STORY

I have just read your story.
So many stories have been so horrible that I was starting to lose
faith in women as a whole.  Thank you so much for restoring my faith
in women as a gender that I was starting to loose.
It is endeed wonderful that there are people willing to apologize
and really mean it when they make a mistake and take undue actions
against others.

i think your work is really great this again is a great example of a story thay you dont know where its going untill the end being trusting is good but some are not so trusting well done again the more stoies of yours i read the more intresting they get and most with a twist at the end

While I love your work nearly always, this is not one of your better efforts. It doesn't really go anywhere and seems way too derivative of "April," which is a classic.  It also has signs of being hastily put together.