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Working Girls
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Comment by Silvia. on 06/21/11
Good. Comment by Aleesha on 06/11/10 Agood story but I would have prefered the story to have been a bit longer. Thanks. Comment by Diane M on 05/29/08 What does Caroline do next? Comment by VIVIENNE on 12/28/03 DEAR CAROLINE, Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/29/02 Congrats on a nice story that was, with one exception, very realistic - I know two transexuals who are CEO's (MD's in the UK?) of their corporations. I do think Caroline should have come out as a TS. In this day and age nothing can really be kept a secret, especially if it's been on the net, and a competitor could wreck havoc with disclosing Caroline as Steve - ENQUIRER headline: "Working GIRLS Corp. headed by a MAN!!!" with an unflattering pic of Steve looking like a man in drag, maybe from the early days. Better to admit it up front; it could work in their favor. After all, who's more a true believer than a convert? Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/29/02 Congrats on a nice story that was, with one exception, very realistic - I know two transexuals who are CEO's (MD's in the UK?) of their corporations. I do think Caroline should have come out as a TS. In this day and age nothing can really be kept a secret, especially if it's been on the net, and a competitor could wreck havoc with disclosing Caroline as Steve - ENQUIRER headline: "Working GIRLS Corp. headed by a MAN!!!" with an unflattering pic of Steve looking like a man in drag, maybe from the early days. Better to admit it up front; it could work in their favor. After all, who's more a true believer than a convert? Comment by Amanda Nicole on 07/01/02 Great story! Comment by Nellie D on 06/12/02 A very nice story of a husband and wife team that starts a company with a different target group. The writing and plot line are good. And the story is quite believable. Comment by Pervette on 06/12/02 It's such a pleasure when someone takes a tired old plot idea and Comment by Brriar Lorenz on 06/11/02 Nice beginning and nice idea, I hope you will continue this story. Thanks for it. Luv, Briar |
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