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Comment by Jhoy on 10/23/12
why do you have posters of THEM!?!?!? i silmpe asked what was wrong with the posters of them (pg posters with) then my friend was bickering about lohan going to jail and demi going to rehab and Brittney and the things that happened to her this made me very uppset! i told her that everyone has their mistakes and most of them is trying to figure out life and i defended all of the posters! Lets just say my friend was mad at me for the rest of the day but i didnt care because she doesnt know them and has no right to say these things!!! the one and only onemagicgirle299a5 Comment by julie j on 01/05/05 again this is a great story but i do refer to previous comments well done written& explained more please thankyou Comment by julie j on 08/14/04 i like this story also i see an number of other parts you could use to bring it on more ie like at night how does she sleep i imagine the second cage will be for that what a way to go more please on this story, i could imagine myself in that position exciting Comment by j on 08/14/04 i like this story also i see an number of other partsyou could use to bring it on more ie like at night how does she sleep i imagine the second cage will be for that what a way to go more please on this story, i could imagine myself in that position exciting Comment by Gwen Brown on 10/16/03 I had thought that this story would be much longer. It was very nice and I can see a number of potential developments. Comment by J on 11/28/01 I enjoyed this story very much. It, like your other writing, is very interesting. I hope you continue it, and concentrate on making it believable. For example, do the chains get removed when she is not working? Can she earn paroles or vacations? Where will she get inspiration? I know that many writers have lots of things around them, to exercise their imagination. I expect that, after a while (certainly less than a year), her writing might dry up, or become rote and repetitive. |
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