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Xora 2: Dangerous Game
by Brandy Dewinter

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
V4Q1fu Im no expert, but I think you just crafted a very good point point. You definitely understand what youre talking about, and I can truly get behind that. Thanks for being so upfront and so truthful.

Comment by suba me on 04/19/19
8Neq4t Many thanks for sharing this first-class piece. Very interesting ideas! (as always, btw)

Comment by suba me on 04/15/19
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Comment by i love pron on 12/21/18
nXI11c Way cool! Some very valid points! I appreciate you writing this write-up plus the rest of the site is really good.

Comment by Prince on 07/09/12
i take it you were doggy style since you say you didnt know. sorry to tell you. i will bet all the money i will make this year his friends have aarledy seen it or they will very soon. how do i know. because i have seen friends do the same thing and show it to every one they know.

Comment by stanley morton on 08/01/07
Dangerous Game? yes Xora's game. That guy turned girl is deadly to enemies, a boon to friends. and a lover to the right guy. Now for more Xora tales

Comment by Gwen Boucher (Gwen Brown, Gwen Bouche', Credence Brown) on 04/17/06
OH my gosh, you make me sooooo jealous. Your stories are so charming and believable and wonderful. I felt chills and other very nice things running up and down my body while I read this story.

I just know that I will never write as good as you and it breaks my heart. I wanted to be so good but I just can't. Would you please write more about any one you wish to I like Xora a lot but all your characters just seem so real. The stories just suck me in and all of a sudden I am in another world.


Please, please, please GET TO WORK !!!!

Gwen Boucher (My real name)

Comment by Rose2 on 08/22/01
 The Most Dangerous Game,  if you are reasonably well read you recognize the title and the direction the story will take.  Then reality will hit because Brandy is not just an ordinary writer.  The story goes beyond our meer mortal limits and takes a life of its own.  The illistrations are a treat you don't get to often.  

Comment by mermaidlover on 08/11/01
I love this story and read both parts on your web site. I hope you think about writing a third story about Xora. They are really two of the best stories i've read.



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