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Xora 3: Shell Game
by Brandy Dewinter

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Comment by Brooks on 01/08/13
Your thinking macthes mine - great minds think alike!

Comment by Gracelynn on 07/21/11
Yup, that'll do it. You have my apprceiation.

Comment by Kaylin on 07/20/11
That's 2 celver by half and 2x2 clever 4 me. Thanks!

Comment by Sayge on 06/29/10
Hi Brandy,

I do hope that this is not the end.  It is hard sometimes to find an author whose talent is such that a long story can be told and not lose the strength of character and/or plot.

The Xora sega is the best I have read in a long time and is better than a lot of the authors you find in the book stores. You have a great talent for stories and I can not wait to see what comes next.

Good luck and keep writing.
Sayge


Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 07/28/07
BRANDY, SHAME ON YOU FOR CREATING THIS COMEDIC ADVENTURE. I WAS GIGGLING THROUGH OUT THE STORY. YOU HAVE PROVEN THAT A CHRISTIAN CAN WRITE GOOD T.G. STORIES. [YES, I VISITED YOUR WEB SITE, I AS A FELLOW CHRISTIAN SUPPORT YOU. I, LIKE YOU HATE IT WHEN HYPOCRITS ATTACK. HERE IA A BROTHERLY HUG GIRL. MAY YOUR LIGHT CONTINUE TO SHINE

Comment by Diane Castle on 06/20/04
Brandy,
  I have read all three Xora stories now, and I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed them all.  I was even motivated enough to go look up Lissa's original story.  Yours are so much better.  (Sorry, Lissa!)  I love the longer stories, with all the detail, the plot components, and the way that Xora's character evolves even more so than his/her body.
  I have two problems.  One, now I need to read everything else you have written on Storysite, which will create a serious problem with meeting my real-world deadlines.  :-)  And two, I have found that some of your GIFs do not display from many reader sites.  Of course, neither is your fault...

Diane

Comment by Chrisl on 02/21/03
Hi Brandy,
         Love this story, lotsa excitement, giggles and good triumphs over evil :)
I started reading part 1 of this here and had to pop over to FM and download all three stories.
Spending a few hours at a time with your universe in the depth of the night is a really good way to relax and forget about the troubles of the world.
A few Authors such as yourself, Tigger, Darkside, Rebekka and Crystal write the long complex fantasies that to my mind should be published alongside the latest J. D. Robb at Chapters.    
Thanks and Huggles,
Chrisl  

Comment by Mary on 02/15/03
Always nice to see something new from you Brandy.

I love your Xora series and hope to see more of her.

Mary

Comment by Melissa Daniels on 02/11/03
Hi Brandy...
So great to see Xora again...
You're one of the major influences in the stories that my partner and I write and it's always such a delight to see new stuff.
-Melissa



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