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The X-Tests
by Bethany Jacques

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Comment by Silvia. on 01/02/11
Bad story.

Comment by Robert on 08/27/09
Dear Bethany,

Excellent work!  Rather reminds me of an experience I had as a therapist.  Pity I wasn't involved in any of the hot and sweaties, though.

In any case, keep up the good work, looking forward to much more.

Sincerely,

Kudos,

Ra

PS: Check out the story 'Bethany's Secret' at NiftyArchive.com.
      I think you might enjoy it.

R


Comment by SassySue on 12/05/04
I just got around to reading this story and must agree with Dawna's comment: WOW!  This was a very well written, highly erotic tale with an unexpected outcome.

Keep up the good work!

SS

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 08/22/04
Dear Bethany:

   This sensual and erotic tale is truly riveting. It is a scary plan too, with a marriage in the balance. I feel this story should be appreciated more as there is an intensitiy here I rarely see or feel in any story. This is an excellent tale.

Hugs,

Kristi

Comment by DAWNA on 08/19/03
WOW.  A wonderful erotic tale.  Everyone should have such a wonderful opportunity to explore their various sexual preferences.  I really enjoyed it - where can I take the X-test?  Loved the descriptions of the outfits (especially that red PVC).  Thanks for an "exciting" read.



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