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I think that this is a fantastic story and you should continue writing stories like this or even add more to this story maybe a year in the future and she is dating someone. Keep up the good work.

Hi.
Being a girl isn't bad. Why he felt so badly for being a girl?
I cant understand it!
But, I liked your story, it's a good story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Amazing story vuvoid panties where are they send me some very erotic

Ok this is a story that should be done yet again with new chars or a part 3 should be added doesn't matter which way it's done just please continue this story!

I truly enjoyed this tale - all that agony at the prospect of changing into a girl and, slowly but inevitably, the growing realisation that there are.......compensations.    

I would love to see this Story Continued!  Please Keep it up.

Part II was a great improvment over part I .....Now looking forward to more and hope author keeps it out of heavy X or XXX

great story with parts 1 and 2  hope more to this till will come.

Great story, I love the DNA retrovirus plot.  A very "up-to-date" story.  Talk about being "forced" and no return.  

I believe the way the boy contracted the virus is very plausable.  A good insert and appropriate use of sex in the story.  Keep up the good work.  

Maybe a "suspense" or "thriller" about the "x-virus"?  Can you say, "Bond, Janelle Bond"?    

All I got to say is Dam!  You are truly skilled!  You should have thought about getting them published as book first in my opinion!  But thank you for sharring these I can't wait for you to complete them and and more like them as well!

Wow! Your story really transports the reader into a scary place. Although I am a girl, reading your story made me wonder how I would react to losing a penis to grow a vulva. In fact the story was so vivid that I found myself play acting the end of the story, pretending that I had just been changed into a girl while I touched my own vulva. In that mindset I really felt for your character, and can imagine how they would feel.
Looking forward to your next chapter...

Hi Lisa!

I read the story yesterday and let it sink in. The story is well told and well written. I do think, however, the angst and agony is a tad overblown. I am very concerned about the lack of support by the medical team and the boy's father. From the story content, the doctor knows of the X-Virus and does nothing to  counsel or have a referral to a support group. This is not good. The father seems unwilling or unable to cope. This also is not good. Perhaps, in part 2 we will see acceptance of the new gender together with a new mind set. I did like the story, notwithstanding the above.

Cassandra

Could have been a good story but author decided to go down the XXX road

Dam, i wish something that would happen to me.

I must agree, somewhat, with Briar that an inordinate amount of the story is spent in protest.  Don't get me wrong; I think it's refreshing to view the transformation differently.

Overall, I really enjoyed both this and Vulvoid Transformation.  Both stories were an easy read and piqued my interest.  In the transformation genre, I think you've hit on an interesting point of view and I'm looking forward to see more from you.

Thank you for sharing your stories.  

Methinks the Lady doth protest too much.

So what is so terrible about being turned into a girl ?  

Your story is a good idea  but I think you have overdone the supposed discomfort.  Most of your Storysite readers would not have much sympathy for your character - they would prefer to know where they could go to get infected !

I think that, these days, even most BOYS know that being a girl is nicer than being a boy.

Woah.  I'll trade places with your character.  Such negativity... how come the father never comforts the child?  We never hear anything from the father that might be soothing... this kid needs a serious spanking or maybe a sedative or three... he's hysterical and likely to hurt herself...

Dayna.

I read the X-Vius story and did not read the Vulvoid Transformation one.

Wow, this is a much different story than I usually read, but your style of writing sort of caught me. So far you have two charecters that hate the transformation. Your descriptions of the changes especially the vulva change really were fantastic!

You are a good writer, keep it up and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Huggles
Angel