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You Can
by Amanda Walker

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Comment by Rone Welles on 01/20/12
 A timeless fine story .. The Author should be proud of this effort.  a great AUTHOR indeed a fine and talented AUTHOR ..

Thank You  XOXOXXX Rone Welles


Comment by Silvia. on 06/14/10
Well done.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by CAD on 04/14/09
I LOVE THE STORY YOU CAN. Keep up the great writing. I want to know if you did any more with these characters. Again great writing. I WISH YOU PEACE AND HAPPINESS

Comment by Missy on 12/19/08
thank you for story, it reminded me of when i went to school.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/17/08
Very good story.  I guess after all this time there won't be a sequel.  Too bad.

Comment by Pauline Brendon on 09/23/07
What a lovely story. Amanda you are getting better all the while but please explaine how Mike suddenly becomes Mark?????

Comment by julie on 03/12/03
a very good story it was interesting how mark so readilly agreed with it very good writing i would like to see some more added to this story

Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/16/02
i thought that open ended stories went out with Alfred Hitchkock. This is a good story. I liked it very much.

Barb.

Comment by Todd on 01/04/02
Loved this story. Would also love to read about Sally's further adventures.

Thank you for a great read!

Comment by zikan55 on 12/14/00
always liked dressing as schoolgirl and stories that deal with this     enjoyed this one very much



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