Waiting for the next episode.

Are you going to finish/continue "You Can Run, But Can You Hide?"

FWIW, I had exactly the reaction Jezzi did.  My first thought was that the tape was faked -- since he's forgotten everything that's happened in the training, they could easily have forced him to make the tape during the process.  (I'm reminded of the episode of The Prisoner where Number 6 discovers that he's been brainwashed into thinking that he's the loyal operative brought from outside to replace the "real" Number 6.)

After part 4:
  This just sort of took the internal conflict out of the story.  He seems the paranoid type; I know my first thought would be, "They conditioned me without my consent; they probably faked the tape.  There must be some sinister reason they want me as a 13 year old girl and are trying to make it easier on themselves by having me decide it 'of my own free will'."

Thanks for this chapter. The story is progessing very well. The characters are filling-in even more and the scope of the plot is broadening.  I am on the edge of my chair waiting for the next episode.  Mmmmm let's see now, who would be killing one of the residents?

This really held my interest.  Plenty of action and not much complications in the plot.  This could be a fun story if it doesn't get too big, or too involved.  Gives me a feel like Kelly Davison's "Andersonville".  A secret society hidden from most people.
Don't want to wait long for the the next chapter.  Good luck with this and Wildfire.

Hi Tanya

It looks like a promising start.

Hugs, Fran

I like this, a very good start

I hope DO over and Wildfire keep going though

yep.. sounds familiar.. but then hopefully.. something nice will come of it.. :)

I think I know where this is going but looks like the start of a good story.