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You Can't Choose Your Family
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Comment by Jim Karner on 04/28/15
Write as many stories as you like but PLEASE do not attempt to have any of them published. Comment by antonia on 01/11/07 As with many of the writers the spelling, and especially the punctuation is disgraceful. They should never have been permitted to leave school. American education seems worse than British, if that were possible. Comment by Pauline on 02/11/05 Only one comment - Comment by julie j on 11/05/04 its shows how jealouse some women get to me it souds like a servere set up & frame what a way to go Comment by julie on 04/18/03 well what a vicious sister and what a perfect set up oh how jealouse some girls get a good begining to a good story you can go far with this one but it needs some tidying up and spelling corrections but a good start look foreward to the next instalment Comment by Ami Lamida on 04/08/03 I think you had a good idea here for a story, but you REALLY, REALLY need to find an editor to touch it up for you. Please contact Geoff (geoff1941@hotmail.com), me (amilamida@hotmail.com) or any of the other volunteer (that's right - FREE!) editors from the volunteer editors page in the author's corner. Your stories will thank you. |
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