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You'll Have To Wear A Skirt
by Josie Brian

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Comment by juliej on 08/03/07
a story based on two lines but different this story should have been first with the other a follow on as a next sequel the parents geting together etc but brilliant well worth reading &enjoyable thankyou
Comment by Josie on 03/11/06
Thanks for the comments, when time permits I'll try to continue the story. Jezzie had some fun ideas on how it might proceed. If you're interested, this is a link to the site where I found the original story

http://www.misterpoll.com/poll.mpl?id=419460542

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/16/06
<<  Before I could start changing my clothes, 2 of my friends came to the house. ...  But before leaving, Gareth said something that scared me silly.
"You look like a girl Adrian, when you're well enough to come out your going to be my girl. Although, I may be willing to share you with a few of my friends. Just be sure to wear something pretty and I won't have to break your legs again"  >>

Friends ???  You didn't make what Gareth said sound like friendly joking.  I hope Adrian beats the grap out of Gareth when he gets better.
Comment by a guy on 01/16/06
an accidient and incompetence leave a transvestite situation.

humiliation, and at the very end a brutal threat to remain a ts against his will leave this with a sour taste.
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