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Comment by leelee on 04/08/10
I do not know why it takes me so long to find storeies like this  but I am glad I found it   Right away I knew it was a semi hypno story and I fell into it  but the truth is I read through it first and then got most of the stuff I needed and had it her by the computer  except for the nail polish and washed hair   by the time I finished  you instructions   lauralee had emerged.  I must confess though that five years ago I downloaded an expensive hynosis tape that completely changed my thinking habits. In 25 one hour sessions  I went from a blue collar  tough guy into a perfect lady and a willing sissy...All still stuck up there in my mind. I always think I am a woman and I subconsciously walk and chat like one  It is such a turn on and now you have given me another avenue   Thank you   Oh and yes this whole thing did finally put me in a dress in a little club in Providence RI and I left there with a wonderful man to experience my first ever date!  

Comment by Tammie on 02/06/09
I really enjoy this story and get sucked in everytime I read it.  Such fun, to be included in the story--reminded me of the books I read as a kid that you could choose the ending.  I'd love it if you did another similar one just to give us something fresh to play along with.  Btw, are you posting anywhere else, its been ages since I've seen anything new from you.  Thanks again, Tammie

Comment by Chelsea xD on 01/13/08
That was... interesting xD Umm... I'm not a boy, silly. I'm full time already so this thing was kind of pointless for me, though she lied to me >< Mean old lady, she said I would get pregnant, I know that's not possible. I've wanted to bear a child of my own since I was 10 years old T_T

Comment by Fancy Nancy on 08/31/06
Years ago (I forget who wrote it), I read one female writer's personal impressions of what constituted "sexy".  Some good points. Long hair is sexy.  Skirts and dresses (especially if short) are sexy. What she called "your mini-est slip peeking out from under your mini-est skirt" is sexy. But any kind of pants, slacks, or trousers are ABSOLUTELY, POSITIVELY NOT, NOT sexy.  Regardless.  So be it!

Comment by Debilyn on 08/05/06
Jen, you're a gal after my own heart! Finally, someone who hates pants as much as I do.  I'll follow your instructions implicitly and always be a good and proper girl, and never betray my (adopted) sex.  Bras, panties, feminine napkins (changed frequently to preserve daintiness), skirts, dresses, perfume, baby powder, and makeup FOREVER!

Comment by sabrina sweete on 05/24/04
Great story. i loved dressing just as instructed. i hope its okay that i chose yellow pumps and nail polish to match the top i chose earlier, its just that my yellow top with the word 'cute' seemed most appropriate when i was told to wear something cute. i'm sure glad i started shaving my legs a while back, since the instructions never gave me a chance to put on tights like i used to do.

Comment by Diane from Minnesota on 04/12/04
What a great story, I am home alone for a couple of days and did just as you said. It took me awhile to get through the instuctions but I did and here I am sitting in my dress with panties and bra, my nails are done as well as my makeup, and i have on a pretty wig. I think I will drive to the next town and do some girl shopping just for me, it will be so much fun, and although I have been out as Diane before I have never gone shopping dressed and after reading this story I want it so bad. Please keep up the good work and do more stories like this one. Diane in Minnesota

Comment by Gina La Valampe on 04/11/04
Jennifer, this story is priceless. It was so much fun to insert my name and answer your questions to make this story come alive.
Gina

Comment by tara on 04/11/04
One of these days, I'll have to read this story without playing along with the instructions, because the way things go now, I'll never find out how it ends.  :)

Comment by Tiffany on 04/10/04
This is abosolutely wonderful!!!  I have always wished people would make more stories like this.  Please keep posting more like it.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/09/04
Wonderful!  Certainly not like being forced, like your mom or your beautician was talking to you, wanting nothing but the best for you.  I felt so good after this read.  Congrats

Comment by Cassandra on 04/09/04
Absolutely wonderful, Jennifer!

I really enjoyed this "story" in its totality.

Comment by cj on 04/08/04
Wow. This is an incredible story!!  Specific in the right areas, yet open enough for all the possibilities of dressing.

Wonderful!!

And, I think it works for those who really want to be girls, and those who want to be forced to be girls. Well done!!



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