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Comment by cheap backlinks on 07/18/14
tTnxOk I value the article.Much thanks again. Really Cool. Comment by chzwiz on 11/07/11 A lovely story and a lovely ending. Comment by Paula Mortenson on 11/04/10 Hi Comment by Alison Mary on 06/26/10 Dear Abby, Comment by Silvia. on 04/28/10 Hi Abby. Comment by Aleesha on 01/16/10 Judging by all the posts your story was a great hit. I felt so let down at the end as there was no conclusion. I enjoyed your story very much and even after 6 years if you can't write a conclusion please let someone else di it. Comment by dee on 10/22/09 thank you for the wonderful dream Comment by dee on 10/22/09 great story and i cant wait to read the next part. thank you Comment by WannabeGinger on 01/16/09 How have I missed this lovely piece of writing..... Cleverly constructed situation - probably all-too likely in many lives..... CD has to leave after lover betrays her inner reactions to TV habits..... Then, all may start again when a chance meeting happens. Beautiful! I don't see the need to bring in abuse as a child.... many of us love what we love doing without balming 'abuse' No great need for a sequel, (letting the imagination about what follows the first a deux encounter is enough!)though it could be interesting. Comment by Anne Marie on 11/12/08 Very enjoyable..Will there be more in the series? Comment by cathy angela davis on 07/06/08 when are you going to finish it? Comment by Kenny M on 08/26/05 I just read part 1 of the Zelda story, and I could not take my eyes off of it. My mouth is so dry right now, it is not even funny. I usually drink 6 to 7 pots of tea every day, and there is not much that can get in the way of me getting my tea, but this story definitely has. I crossdress. Not nearly as much as I used to, but occasionally. The reason I do not cross dress as much is because I told my fiancee about it, and she was not ok with it. I love her more than life itself, but I still want to dress up. Comment by anonymousOne on 08/16/05 Abby Rhodes, Comment by PMD on 11/12/04 Excellent story, thank you. Do you have any more about Matt/Zelda & Yvette? Comment by Early June on 07/09/04 It is so nice to see a atory explore interacting personalities. As the author, you finished the story right where it should finish. You have done a marvelous job in creating and executing a well toned narrative.Thanks for sharing it and your talent with us. Comment by Eileen Edwards on 06/23/04 Dear Abby.. Comment by Rick on 04/29/04 Really enjoyable story -- moved me to tears. Comment by Kristelle on 04/21/04 [quote] Comment by Pallavi on 03/29/04 Comment by Pallavi on 03/29/04 Hi, Comment by Fran on 03/19/04 >Comment by Fran on 01/17/04 Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 03/19/04 Dear Abby: Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/19/04 After part 2: Comment by Gabrielle on 03/19/04 Abby, Comment by sheryl on 01/24/04 Add me to your list of admirers. very well told. Comment by Pallavi on 01/23/04 As a crossdresser who has gone through the experience of telling his wife, I think this is a wonderful story. Please do post the sequel. I really hope Matt / Zelda and Yvette can get back together and have greate times together... Comment by Jeanette2b on 01/17/04 Zelda is a beautifully written examination of the tension/conflict resulting when one partner in a relationship is transgendered. I have experienced many of these scenes. It is as if you were hiding behind a plant taking notes during a dinner conversation I had in years past. Remove the evil mother and the story is common in many of our lives. Comment by Fran on 01/17/04 Thank you Abby Comment by Joanna on 01/17/04 This is the kind of story I keep returning here for. Soft, without the heavyhanded bondage and dominance. And wide open for a second chapter. thank you Comment by Jennifer / Peter on 01/16/04 Truth be told, I am much more a fan of femdom literature .. and almost skipped over this story. What a joy not to have done so. This was as sentimental and touching and heartfelt a story as I have read in years. Furthermore, I found the ending absolutely perfect .. a delightful hint of the unknown. Thank you so very much. Comment by Joni on 01/16/04 Abby, fantastic story. Please do not stop there. I am a romantic at heart, and would love for Yvette to realize she loves Matt dearly and accepts the Zelda part of him. I know this is very rough for women to accept, that their spouse is better looking than them, and they hate it. but let her become comfortable in her body (Yvettes) so she can be comfortable with Zelda. I know it is an emotional roller coaster, I know from experiance. Comment by Joni on 01/16/04 Abby, fantastic story. Please do not stop there. Iam a romantic at heart, and would love for Yvette to realize she loves Matt dearly and acepts the Zelda part of him. I know thisis very rough for women to accept, that their spouse is better looking than them, and they hate it. but let her become comfortable in her body (yvettes) so she can be comfortable with Zelda. I know it is an emotional roller coaster, I know from experiance. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/16/04 WOW! Great story. I guess that we are supposed to end the story ourselves, each of us as she'd like, so here goes: |
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